Comment from fairydancer

Exceptional

Gary, this is brilliant - I see you've been through it too! (Depression that is.)
This is so true.
In the first line, should 'you're' be 'you' or 'you'll' ??
Your poem has great flow and rhyming, but so much more...
Very true messages, clear understanding, and really shows your inner strength!
Well done! - Cally :)

 Comment Written 05-May-2010

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reply by the author on 05-May-2010

Thanks Cally

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

Wow, very meaningful poem with a very clear message, very helpful, positive and optimistic. Good images and style. It was a pleasure to read.

Reach out for the hands that will pull you up high

Remember the past on this new path you fly

Real friend will stay, locked deep in your heart

 Comment Written 05-May-2010

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reply by the author on 05-May-2010

Thanks for reading Pili

Comment from Rama Rao

Excellent

An excellent short poem with a good message.
It flowed smoothly and made good reading.
Real friends will stay and guide you to success.
Good job.

 Comment Written 04-May-2010

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reply by the author on 05-May-2010

Thank you for reading

Comment from jwlee211

Excellent

great poem. I love the message about finding true friends that will help you through life and the new path that you will take. Great job

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 Comment Written 04-May-2010

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reply by the author on 04-May-2010

thank you jwlee