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Writings From the Heart

Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "One can say,"
A book of Poetry & Writing

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Comment from Ben Colder
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Sounds like words from Chief Joseph. Looks like the white man got the land or most of it and the Indian have the casinos. Thanks for sharing. Shalom

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 Comment Written 24-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
    thank you
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Will you're achievements be worthy? - you're (you are)? - should be your. It gives the reader something to ponder.
~teresa~

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 Comment Written 24-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
    thanks