Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Over the Top 1914 Eastern Front"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from BeautifulLie
Another great read! The last line is my favourite part! A nice smooth read, well worded. Thanks for sharing your work with us and keep at it!
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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Another great read! The last line is my favourite part! A nice smooth read, well worded. Thanks for sharing your work with us and keep at it!
Comment Written 30-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you Beautifullie
Comment from meg2
Very insightful, full of meaning. One is able to sense the desperation call of "fix bayonets".The following are my favorite lines.
You tell us that our strength was sold
To help your country back
What evil times have carnage chosen
For judgment on this land
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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Very insightful, full of meaning. One is able to sense the desperation call of "fix bayonets".The following are my favorite lines.
You tell us that our strength was sold
To help your country back
What evil times have carnage chosen
For judgment on this land
Comment Written 30-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you meg
Comment from l.conley
Great Poem, you told a wonderful story and a little history lesson. I really enjoyed reading this peace. The picture you picked was perfect. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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Great Poem, you told a wonderful story and a little history lesson. I really enjoyed reading this peace. The picture you picked was perfect. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 30-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thanks again GW
Comment from chita
I really like the artwork and you have a great rhythm until the last line which I feel could read different as far as the flow. You have a great read and you say so much and the story line I would like to read the previous writings going with this one. This is a very good read.
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I really like the artwork and you have a great rhythm until the last line which I feel could read different as far as the flow. You have a great read and you say so much and the story line I would like to read the previous writings going with this one. This is a very good read.
Comment Written 30-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you chita
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Beautifully written ode to the soldiers of WWI. Great rhythm and flow- Much in-depth meaning. Thanks once again for sharing your brilliant insight with us. Betty
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Beautifully written ode to the soldiers of WWI. Great rhythm and flow- Much in-depth meaning. Thanks once again for sharing your brilliant insight with us. Betty
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thanks again for reading Betty
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi deepwater. War poetry is my favourite type and I am a big fan of Wilfred Owen and Siegfried Sassoon. Superb imagery, ie, our dead will mock the searing heat. Well done
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Hi deepwater. War poetry is my favourite type and I am a big fan of Wilfred Owen and Siegfried Sassoon. Superb imagery, ie, our dead will mock the searing heat. Well done
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you for reading Wendy
Comment from RebelRose
A very poignant depiction of a letter from a soldier.
It's an interesting poem with very good imagery. The picture looks like something from a scene of an old war movie.
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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A very poignant depiction of a letter from a soldier.
It's an interesting poem with very good imagery. The picture looks like something from a scene of an old war movie.
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thanks for reading Rose
Comment from spiceydog
You have created a powerful sense of these men in an economy of well crafted lines. Your words convey the unblinking acceptance of a harsh situation and an honest unflinching courage to do whatever must be done. This is an excellent piece of writing
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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You have created a powerful sense of these men in an economy of well crafted lines. Your words convey the unblinking acceptance of a harsh situation and an honest unflinching courage to do whatever must be done. This is an excellent piece of writing
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you spicey
Comment from José Ángel
Beautiful history made poem... ... the past... the war... the words have a lot of force, it gives him the touch of setting to the epoch... It's excellent... congratulations, hugs.
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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Beautiful history made poem... ... the past... the war... the words have a lot of force, it gives him the touch of setting to the epoch... It's excellent... congratulations, hugs.
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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thanks again Joan
Comment from BLACKDYKE
Beautiful historical poetry deep' and typical of many war time writers. This though is as the others, unique and most reminiscent of the times and actions of war.
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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Beautiful historical poetry deep' and typical of many war time writers. This though is as the others, unique and most reminiscent of the times and actions of war.
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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thank you for your comment Black