Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Dream or Ghostly Visit?"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Carlos' girl
this is an excellent poem as supernatural as can be. the words and rhymes are woven expertly from beginning to end. you are good at setting an even metre. you have talent.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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this is an excellent poem as supernatural as can be. the words and rhymes are woven expertly from beginning to end. you are good at setting an even metre. you have talent.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Carlos girl, I can not thank you Enough for your kind words.
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aaaww! you're welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Dream or Ghostly Visit, gathers the effects of the night, the times, the fire and finds a culmination that creates a spirit. Whether we assign this conjuring to dreams or the supernatural, it finds a permanence in our minds.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This poem, Dream or Ghostly Visit, gathers the effects of the night, the times, the fire and finds a culmination that creates a spirit. Whether we assign this conjuring to dreams or the supernatural, it finds a permanence in our minds.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Bill, thank you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a beautiful poem. I love the descriptions. You do a wonderful job of painting a scene with your words. Excellent word choices. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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This is a beautiful poem. I love the descriptions. You do a wonderful job of painting a scene with your words. Excellent word choices. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Michael I am so very appreciative of your kind words and validation on this poem. This was my first go at a domino style poem
Comment from Pantygynt
This is the poetic equivalent of the Rubick Cube and for me is a convolution too far. However you seem to have got this right even if the form is one of the finest arguments in favour of free verse that I have seen.
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This is the poetic equivalent of the Rubick Cube and for me is a convolution too far. However you seem to have got this right even if the form is one of the finest arguments in favour of free verse that I have seen.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Ha! Ha! Ha....Roger, that is for certain, it is the challenge, ahh it?s all in the challenge
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Ha! Ha! Ha....Roger, that is for certain, it is the challenge, ahh it?s all in the challenge
Comment from papa55mike
It's good to make those hairs on the back of your neck tingle. I love the picture of the sparks dancing. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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It's good to make those hairs on the back of your neck tingle. I love the picture of the sparks dancing. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Mike wow! I am so truly grateful, for your Kind words and six-star review.