Autumn's Passion
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Comment from blondie560
Fun story. Keeping the romance alive is important. And there's nothing like the fear of getting caught. And if they've been together 15 years life has probably become pretty predictable. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Fun story. Keeping the romance alive is important. And there's nothing like the fear of getting caught. And if they've been together 15 years life has probably become pretty predictable. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from LisaMay
Looks like that balloon is going to get stuck in the tree again. I love your raunchy tale (beaver moon, and it probably isn't even November in your story) - Karen plays the coy coquette very well and Jason is all cock. Why is it that cops are never there when you need them, and when you wish they weren't there they turn up and see?
Best phrase: cut through the hot moment like an ice sickle.
Your story is worth a 6, sorry no can do.
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Looks like that balloon is going to get stuck in the tree again. I love your raunchy tale (beaver moon, and it probably isn't even November in your story) - Karen plays the coy coquette very well and Jason is all cock. Why is it that cops are never there when you need them, and when you wish they weren't there they turn up and see?
Best phrase: cut through the hot moment like an ice sickle.
Your story is worth a 6, sorry no can do.
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wickedly witty take on Beaver Moon--nature imagery indeed. I don't care for gratuitous sex scenes but this naughty bit is too clever to object to. Priceless punchline!
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Wickedly witty take on Beaver Moon--nature imagery indeed. I don't care for gratuitous sex scenes but this naughty bit is too clever to object to. Priceless punchline!
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much