Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. I like your poem. It is clear and concise. Interesting and unique. Excellent work! Nice job. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. I like your poem. It is clear and concise. Interesting and unique. Excellent work! Nice job. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks Raul!
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You're welcome
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of vividly specific and enthusiastic details to paint a picture of childhood footloose and fancy free JOY on snow day. You chose the perfect artwork!
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You have made excellent use of vividly specific and enthusiastic details to paint a picture of childhood footloose and fancy free JOY on snow day. You chose the perfect artwork!
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Janice, I do value your review and comments. Have a wonderful week.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
No school...snow....we know just what to do!
Frolicking
by JLR
Hello my friend
I remember the joy of getting the day off due to snow or anything else. It was awesome. Even getting a cold was worth it to stay home. LoL well done!
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No school...snow....we know just what to do!
Frolicking
by JLR
Hello my friend
I remember the joy of getting the day off due to snow or anything else. It was awesome. Even getting a cold was worth it to stay home. LoL well done!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
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Thanks, 👍
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, another fine challenge well met. Who did not look forward to snow when they were kids? You have written a good free verse here with the perfect picture. 'Rubbing the stardust from my just opened eyes' - good use of metaphor. 'Dashing like Donner and Blitzen' - and
'Then, hopping like a bunny in a garden patch,' - good use of simile. An all round good read. Regards Dorothy x
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Hello JLR, another fine challenge well met. Who did not look forward to snow when they were kids? You have written a good free verse here with the perfect picture. 'Rubbing the stardust from my just opened eyes' - good use of metaphor. 'Dashing like Donner and Blitzen' - and
'Then, hopping like a bunny in a garden patch,' - good use of simile. An all round good read. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
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Smiling back with great appreciation for your reviews and comments.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Maybe that is the reason they call it a wonderful time of the year! A simple pleasure of playing in outdoors andspreading the Christmas cheer around. I enjoyed reading this well-written poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Maybe that is the reason they call it a wonderful time of the year! A simple pleasure of playing in outdoors andspreading the Christmas cheer around. I enjoyed reading this well-written poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
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Seshardi, thank you, I do this is correct.
Comment from Cindy Decker
JLR,
I like your nostalgic take on this photo. There's so much going on in the photo--your poem gives it justice. When I was younger, we used to sled down our road, hoping to stop in time to dodge the cars at the bottom of the hill. Miraculously, no one got hurt!
You've penned an excellent poem giving wonderful memories of winter.
Good luck.
Best wishes,
Cindy.
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JLR,
I like your nostalgic take on this photo. There's so much going on in the photo--your poem gives it justice. When I was younger, we used to sled down our road, hoping to stop in time to dodge the cars at the bottom of the hill. Miraculously, no one got hurt!
You've penned an excellent poem giving wonderful memories of winter.
Good luck.
Best wishes,
Cindy.
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
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Cindy, smiling back! It is so amazing that we approached life with less fear.
Comment from estory
You captured the sense of childlike innocence in this poem, that feeling of being out in the snow as a child, enjoying the sleigh rides, the snowmen, the snow angels and the snowball fights of youth. Those snow forts, those cups of warm cocoa, those cookies waiting for you when you came back in...estory
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You captured the sense of childlike innocence in this poem, that feeling of being out in the snow as a child, enjoying the sleigh rides, the snowmen, the snow angels and the snowball fights of youth. Those snow forts, those cups of warm cocoa, those cookies waiting for you when you came back in...estory
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
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Aah, the memories!
Comment from Boogienights
Yes! This brings back memories of my childhood and the simple free pleasures of outdoor fun. We made our own excitement, without expensive video games and smart phones. Thanks for sharing.
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Yes! This brings back memories of my childhood and the simple free pleasures of outdoor fun. We made our own excitement, without expensive video games and smart phones. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
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Boggienights, yes we didn?t have to be tethered to power supply to keep,our iPhones charging.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about having fun in the snow makes one forget about all the pains and aches we were complaining about just yesterday, and we will complain about tomorrow again.
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A very well-written poem about having fun in the snow makes one forget about all the pains and aches we were complaining about just yesterday, and we will complain about tomorrow again.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
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Sandra thank you, oh the memories.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! This is a fun packed write filled with all the fun in the snow and a touch of seasonal magic with the reindeer included here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Wow! This is a fun packed write filled with all the fun in the snow and a touch of seasonal magic with the reindeer included here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
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Dolly, smiling back at the mirth and lightness of this poem.