The Symbolic Christmas Star
When fun and faith combine.13 total reviews
Comment from palmart
Very nice Season's Poem!! Superb rhyming and wise use of wording. Flow reading and nice picture as well. The green used as a "back curtain" is tree-green but a more contrasting green would have make it better, at least for my Season's humble point of view. Thanks for sharing your poetry! Great Job!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Very nice Season's Poem!! Superb rhyming and wise use of wording. Flow reading and nice picture as well. The green used as a "back curtain" is tree-green but a more contrasting green would have make it better, at least for my Season's humble point of view. Thanks for sharing your poetry! Great Job!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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I truly appreciate this wonderful review!
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You´re very welcome, Writer!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I like the way you think--fun and faith! Stunning S alliteration throughout-sparkling star of serenity--that earns you five sparklers from me!
Clever wordplay-- SON will shine
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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I like the way you think--fun and faith! Stunning S alliteration throughout-sparkling star of serenity--that earns you five sparklers from me!
Clever wordplay-- SON will shine
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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I reckon, if you're not having fun, what's the point? I intend to die laughing.
Comment from djsaxon
Really clever construct with S kicking of each line and the through rhyme. The flow is sometimes a little choppy but the poetic outcome is terrific. Good luck in the contest. DJ
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Really clever construct with S kicking of each line and the through rhyme. The flow is sometimes a little choppy but the poetic outcome is terrific. Good luck in the contest. DJ
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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I modified a couple of lines if you care to look. Have I improved the flow?
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Big thumbs up.
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Thanks for taking a look.