Dreamland
When night comes, I go to...22 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is an interesting poem (story) describing the shadow dancers changing the light. Needless to say, they can never catch up with the lights. Without the light, there will not be shadow dancers. Very smart !!!
I like the ending line: "There'll be there waiting, some other surprise..." There is always something new everyday.
Good writing.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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This is an interesting poem (story) describing the shadow dancers changing the light. Needless to say, they can never catch up with the lights. Without the light, there will not be shadow dancers. Very smart !!!
I like the ending line: "There'll be there waiting, some other surprise..." There is always something new everyday.
Good writing.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading. I pretty much live for new adventures every day, dreams can make that happen. Thank you for this nice review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this joyful poem so spirit - free: "
The shadow dancers took the fairy light,
our nice impromptu dance, was at an end.
The shadow dancers faded in the night,
and I retreated, to paper and pen." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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I love this joyful poem so spirit - free: "
The shadow dancers took the fairy light,
our nice impromptu dance, was at an end.
The shadow dancers faded in the night,
and I retreated, to paper and pen." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review....just hoping for the best. Thanks again. :)
Comment from lancellot
Oh this is very good. You are definitely setting the bar high for this contest. I see now I have to trow out that underachieving mess I wrote and go back to the drawing board.
Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Oh this is very good. You are definitely setting the bar high for this contest. I see now I have to trow out that underachieving mess I wrote and go back to the drawing board.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I'll bet yours is fantastic and I've never won a money contest, so the odds are not in my favor. It's fun to enter though. Have a wonderful night. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
When night comes, I go to...
Dreamland
by Boogienights
Hello my friend
Great entry for the Rhyming Poetry Contest. The font is hard to read...I would use a lighter color. Excellent composition and rhyme. You use wonderful imagination.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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When night comes, I go to...
Dreamland
by Boogienights
Hello my friend
Great entry for the Rhyming Poetry Contest. The font is hard to read...I would use a lighter color. Excellent composition and rhyme. You use wonderful imagination.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, I appreciate hearing from you. :)
Comment from Paul Borders
Golly, that's some good dreamin' there Boogienights. By the way, is your member name from the movie or the song ? A group called Heatwave had a hit with that song title. Sweet dreams and happy writing.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Golly, that's some good dreamin' there Boogienights. By the way, is your member name from the movie or the song ? A group called Heatwave had a hit with that song title. Sweet dreams and happy writing.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thanks for reading my poem. It's from the movie Boogienights with Mark Walberg. I was signing up for FanStory and happened to be watching the movie. Now I wished I picked a cooler name like celestial moon or something like that. :) Thanks again for reviewing my work, it's always appreciated.
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
How beautiful and imaginative. Being a dancer it felt very good reading it. You have such a talent, PUBLISH A BOOK. I'm sure you have enough works to fill several books, JUST DO IT. I feel bad telling you this but for the sake of the syllable count, "Inspired I wrote down everything I saw" Love and Kisses.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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How beautiful and imaginative. Being a dancer it felt very good reading it. You have such a talent, PUBLISH A BOOK. I'm sure you have enough works to fill several books, JUST DO IT. I feel bad telling you this but for the sake of the syllable count, "Inspired I wrote down everything I saw" Love and Kisses.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much! Your words have really brightened my day 🙂I appreciate your suggestion and have changed the line. Thanks so mucn!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about the dream that I doubted you to write this lively poem, there is hope that you will experience more when you go back to sleep.
Typo 2xthere
There'll be (there) waiting, some other surprise.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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A very well-written rhyming poem about the dream that I doubted you to write this lively poem, there is hope that you will experience more when you go back to sleep.
Typo 2xthere
There'll be (there) waiting, some other surprise.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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I hope so! Thanks so much for the review. :)
Comment from Alli Johnston
Beautifully written, as always. I love the photo and color scheme you chose, they match each other and complement the poem so well. This gives off a lucid dream late night vibe
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Beautifully written, as always. I love the photo and color scheme you chose, they match each other and complement the poem so well. This gives off a lucid dream late night vibe
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you so this great review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You turned these shadows into something positive here as often when we close our eyes we fear those night time shadows, a well rhymed and clever poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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You turned these shadows into something positive here as often when we close our eyes we fear those night time shadows, a well rhymed and clever poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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I had fun writing this.....thanks for reading. :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I completely understand your fantasy. Sometimes I gaze into the dark around me and picture angels watching over me. It isn't hard to conjure up a little story. This poem gives the reader a flashing knowledge of the author.
Ralf
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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I completely understand your fantasy. Sometimes I gaze into the dark around me and picture angels watching over me. It isn't hard to conjure up a little story. This poem gives the reader a flashing knowledge of the author.
Ralf
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thanks for reading. I really appreciate everything you've
Done. :)