The Piper
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh how sweet. What is it that makes a bully? Then add a couple more, a group of bullies. He would have broken the flute without a bit of regret. Thank goodness that didn't happen. The flute is very important to Piper. Well done, Debi! Nancy:)
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Oh how sweet. What is it that makes a bully? Then add a couple more, a group of bullies. He would have broken the flute without a bit of regret. Thank goodness that didn't happen. The flute is very important to Piper. Well done, Debi! Nancy:)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi Nancy,
Thank you for the insightful comments and analysis.
Debi
Comment from royowen
I think Jasmine and Peck have rescued the flute from the mischievous and bullying elves, Falcon, Blue Jay and Robin. But who would know that they had fixed the "little red wagon" of those nasty people, they don't like "enchanted", but good on them. Well done Debi, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I think Jasmine and Peck have rescued the flute from the mischievous and bullying elves, Falcon, Blue Jay and Robin. But who would know that they had fixed the "little red wagon" of those nasty people, they don't like "enchanted", but good on them. Well done Debi, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi Roy,
Thank you for the fun comments and analysis of the chapter. I appreciate it.
Debi
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Bless you
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a bunch of twits!! Grrrr... But, hey, what a surprise there, yeah? An enchanted flute... that will have nothing to do with anyone with Piper (or at least won't put up with him being harmed!! ;) What a cool twist to add in here, my lady -- can't wait to see how this 'relationship' develops! ;) A wonderful chapter with an unexpected development - WELL DONE! ;) Thanx for sharing and I look forward to the next! ;)
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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What a bunch of twits!! Grrrr... But, hey, what a surprise there, yeah? An enchanted flute... that will have nothing to do with anyone with Piper (or at least won't put up with him being harmed!! ;) What a cool twist to add in here, my lady -- can't wait to see how this 'relationship' develops! ;) A wonderful chapter with an unexpected development - WELL DONE! ;) Thanx for sharing and I look forward to the next! ;)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi Yvette,
I LOVE your reaction. Yes, the 'relationship' between Piper and his flute has a new twist. You so get it.
Thank you,
Debi
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter 41 of the Fantasy Fiction in continuation speaks about provoked fun and formal fantasy thru a taletelling progressed thru realistic plot development, fostered by a few interesting dialogues with catchy beginning and a mystic continuous ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This Chapter 41 of the Fantasy Fiction in continuation speaks about provoked fun and formal fantasy thru a taletelling progressed thru realistic plot development, fostered by a few interesting dialogues with catchy beginning and a mystic continuous ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi Alcreator,
I appreciate the analysis and kind comments.
Debi
Comment from lancellot
This is very good. I found myself taken away and visualizing the entire scene. Well done.
notes:
"Summerstorm. Piper Summerstorm{,}" Piper briefly thought
- This was spoken out loud, right?
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This is very good. I found myself taken away and visualizing the entire scene. Well done.
notes:
"Summerstorm. Piper Summerstorm{,}" Piper briefly thought
- This was spoken out loud, right?
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi Lancellot,
Thank you for the six stars and the encouraging comments. I appreciate it a lot.
Thanks too for catching the SPAG. How did I miss that? LOL
Debi