Shimmering
a memory16 total reviews
Comment from estory
Nice abstract work, wonderful image of the roses glittering with tears. Nice epiphany moment too. A great poem of lost love for Valentine's. Its kind of sad but thats how love goes sometimes. estory
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Nice abstract work, wonderful image of the roses glittering with tears. Nice epiphany moment too. A great poem of lost love for Valentine's. Its kind of sad but thats how love goes sometimes. estory
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thank you:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Magnificent! Perhaps it's on account of being a bit jaded after two divorces that I interpret this as romance a la hearts and roses now not even a memory left.
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Magnificent! Perhaps it's on account of being a bit jaded after two divorces that I interpret this as romance a la hearts and roses now not even a memory left.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Oopsie so sorry for this Liz:)
Comment from lyenochka
This makes me sad. I don't know why there are tears "shimmering down the time." I wonder if it brings back happy memories or sad memories but then the last line tells me that the memories are lost. And that is sadder.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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This makes me sad. I don't know why there are tears "shimmering down the time." I wonder if it brings back happy memories or sad memories but then the last line tells me that the memories are lost. And that is sadder.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Thank you:)
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. You made a perfect three line poem. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing! No grammatical errors. I like it. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. You made a perfect three line poem. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing! No grammatical errors. I like it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Thank you
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You're welcome!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am NOT a poet, but I read the second line as :
Tears shimmering with time.
That's the reason I don't write poetry. LOL
I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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I am NOT a poet, but I read the second line as :
Tears shimmering with time.
That's the reason I don't write poetry. LOL
I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Thank you
Comment from amada
This is a great 3 line poem. Its main focus is in roses. Just the name alone brings sweet smiles to this reader. Roses always evoke summer, glorious summer. I wish you well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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This is a great 3 line poem. Its main focus is in roses. Just the name alone brings sweet smiles to this reader. Roses always evoke summer, glorious summer. I wish you well in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for taking a chance on my shimmering roses:)