Voice in the Ocean
Four Line Poem13 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Greg.
-You wrote a very good
poem for the contest.
-Excellent images that
are also creative.
-I like your premise about
the muse pulling the pen.
-The concluding line continues
with surfing "cursive waves"
and "peaks to plunge." The addition
of alliteration is also good.
-This is a very good entry; hope you win!!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Greg.
-You wrote a very good
poem for the contest.
-Excellent images that
are also creative.
-I like your premise about
the muse pulling the pen.
-The concluding line continues
with surfing "cursive waves"
and "peaks to plunge." The addition
of alliteration is also good.
-This is a very good entry; hope you win!!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Wow thank you!! I LOVE hearing from you. I gotta get to your page. I haven't read anything in weeks!! Always please let me know too if there's something you'd like me to read!!
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There's one way to hear more from me; write more:) I don't know if you fanned me or not, but that's how I know what you have posted. I usually post every Sunday. You night like what I am posting for this Sun. and next. It would mean a lot if you did.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this Four line poetic contest Gregory, an excellent post that writes an impressive narrative of language seduction, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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This is an excellent entry in this Four line poetic contest Gregory, an excellent post that writes an impressive narrative of language seduction, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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THANK YOU ROY!!
Comment from Jay Squires
Oh, yes! I like this poem. It strikes home with any lover of words and language. I especially enjoyed the last line of your poem: "as we surf cursive waves ... peaks to plunge." Highs to lows -- not the destination, but the journey on the page. You gave a lot of writers a rush! I hope it does with the judges as well.
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Oh, yes! I like this poem. It strikes home with any lover of words and language. I especially enjoyed the last line of your poem: "as we surf cursive waves ... peaks to plunge." Highs to lows -- not the destination, but the journey on the page. You gave a lot of writers a rush! I hope it does with the judges as well.
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Whoa I'm Genuinely honored!! Thank you very very much. Seriously! You made my day :)