Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from BethShelby
It looks like Jon is about to kill himself and now Cynthia appears to be on the way out. Hopef Iully the good guys will step in before all you bad guys end up dead. I hope some of the get to do prison time. This is getting very exciting.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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It looks like Jon is about to kill himself and now Cynthia appears to be on the way out. Hopef Iully the good guys will step in before all you bad guys end up dead. I hope some of the get to do prison time. This is getting very exciting.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you as always....Of course I am way behind which isn't strange either. Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Oh-oh. I guess they just knocked Cynthia out? Or did they kill her with the inhalant? I wonder if there's redemption possible for Jon or for Cynthia? Seems like Mason has shown Cynthia his true colors.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Oh-oh. I guess they just knocked Cynthia out? Or did they kill her with the inhalant? I wonder if there's redemption possible for Jon or for Cynthia? Seems like Mason has shown Cynthia his true colors.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you as always....Of course I am way behind which isn't strange either. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
Well it looks like Cynthia is paying for her nosiness and desire to be rich. Mason probably thinks he can get rid of all of them and get away scot- free, but I'm sure he won't. Great chapter, Carol. Hugs
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Well it looks like Cynthia is paying for her nosiness and desire to be rich. Mason probably thinks he can get rid of all of them and get away scot- free, but I'm sure he won't. Great chapter, Carol. Hugs
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I guess somehow I forgot to answer this chapter and I apologize. I knew I had some that needed to be corrected but I guess your got wedged in there too. I appreciate your review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chilling! Brilliant comeuppance. Hard to feel sorry for Jon and Cynthia.
[SUGG OMIT Mentally,] Pete chided himself for his lack of compassion; after all, [he=>SUGG for clarity THIS MAN (or JON)] was a priest.
Inside, he shuffled down the aisle, stopping now and then to stare at the beautiful stained-glass windows [or a=>sugg: and the] statue of Jesus
Cynthia's mouth fell open as she gaped in astonishment at Mason. sugg: Cynthia gaped in astonishment.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Chilling! Brilliant comeuppance. Hard to feel sorry for Jon and Cynthia.
[SUGG OMIT Mentally,] Pete chided himself for his lack of compassion; after all, [he=>SUGG for clarity THIS MAN (or JON)] was a priest.
Inside, he shuffled down the aisle, stopping now and then to stare at the beautiful stained-glass windows [or a=>sugg: and the] statue of Jesus
Cynthia's mouth fell open as she gaped in astonishment at Mason. sugg: Cynthia gaped in astonishment.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Another chapter fixed and updated. Thanks fopr the assistance and suggestions.
smiles, Carol
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter 48 - Secrets in the Wind, of Mystery and Crime Fiction, speaks the solid plot, very complex and diverse, progresses thru an appealing plot development, and the mystery reveals; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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This Chapter 48 - Secrets in the Wind, of Mystery and Crime Fiction, speaks the solid plot, very complex and diverse, progresses thru an appealing plot development, and the mystery reveals; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks for reading, enjoying and the kind compliments. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
He's going to set fire to the church and kill Jon and Cynthia, if she isn't already dead. What a stupid woman! She walked right into that. I can't say I feel sorry for her, she is responsible for too many wrongs, all because she was greedy. Well, this was a firey chapter. I do feel sorry for Jon, she was just very weak, has been all his life. What a shame, his life could have been very different. Well done, my dear friend, this was another amazing chapter!! Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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He's going to set fire to the church and kill Jon and Cynthia, if she isn't already dead. What a stupid woman! She walked right into that. I can't say I feel sorry for her, she is responsible for too many wrongs, all because she was greedy. Well, this was a firey chapter. I do feel sorry for Jon, she was just very weak, has been all his life. What a shame, his life could have been very different. Well done, my dear friend, this was another amazing chapter!! Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you as always....Of course I am way behind which isn't strange either. Smiles, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Everyone finally outlives their usefulness. Even Cynthia. Oh, my. I imagine she never thought that day would come. IIIIIII never thought that day would come. But she can't die! We still have to write that prequel! Oh, my.... oh, my... Oh, my!!!!
And, of course - I'm out of chapters!!!!!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Carol,
Everyone finally outlives their usefulness. Even Cynthia. Oh, my. I imagine she never thought that day would come. IIIIIII never thought that day would come. But she can't die! We still have to write that prequel! Oh, my.... oh, my... Oh, my!!!!
And, of course - I'm out of chapters!!!!!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Guess who is far behind on answering all these reviews. I am doing my best to make the changes and corrections and getting back to everyone. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Not good. Sounds like Cynthia has met her match. I wonder if Garth and Hank will save here. It sounds as if Jon committed suicide. I like this story.
Pete felt strange about leaving him, but he wasn't his babysitter, just the driver. (Who's POV are you in. Later on it seems you're in Jon's.)
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Not good. Sounds like Cynthia has met her match. I wonder if Garth and Hank will save here. It sounds as if Jon committed suicide. I like this story.
Pete felt strange about leaving him, but he wasn't his babysitter, just the driver. (Who's POV are you in. Later on it seems you're in Jon's.)
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks for reading, enjoying and the kind compliments. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lancellot
A good chapter. I am not surprised by Cynthia's blindness. She isn't the first person to see and hear only what they want until it's too late. It seems Mason is planning to take care of two useless birds with one stone. I hope Jon isn't too drunk.
Good work.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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A good chapter. I am not surprised by Cynthia's blindness. She isn't the first person to see and hear only what they want until it's too late. It seems Mason is planning to take care of two useless birds with one stone. I hope Jon isn't too drunk.
Good work.
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks for reading, enjoying and the kind compliments. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol