Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from Judy Lawless
Well, it looks like Mason has been caught, but still Annie is in danger of that crazy Tito. So we hold our breath once again. Excellent chapter, Carol and I'm all out of sixes. Sorry.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Well, it looks like Mason has been caught, but still Annie is in danger of that crazy Tito. So we hold our breath once again. Excellent chapter, Carol and I'm all out of sixes. Sorry.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Not Mason yet.... he escaped expecting Sofia to bring him the money and papers from his safe, but she didn't make it on the plane. Mason is somewhere but not there. Thank you! But not to worry, he is going to show up again.
Smiles, Carol
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Oh, ok. I thought he was on the plane, after grabbing at least one bag from Sofia.
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that was one of the men he sent there to get it from Sofia...I'll check to see if I need to make that clearer
Comment from royowen
Perhaps there is a scrap of goodness in Miguel, perhaps he will prevent Tito from killing Annie, (of course we want Annie to live right?) but Sofia has been caught, and Mason being a "every man for himself nasty" is trying to escape, but what a good idea to spill retardant on the plane, heh heh, beautifully written. Carol, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Perhaps there is a scrap of goodness in Miguel, perhaps he will prevent Tito from killing Annie, (of course we want Annie to live right?) but Sofia has been caught, and Mason being a "every man for himself nasty" is trying to escape, but what a good idea to spill retardant on the plane, heh heh, beautifully written. Carol, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you... I was trying to think of something original to stop the plane and then I thought of all the planes involved in firefighting. As for Mason I fear we haven't seen the end of him yet.... He shall get what he deserves.
Smiles, Carol
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I don?t mind him getting?his.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a scary book that is full of killing and murdering. Tito starts to help Miguel and later Miguel stops Tito from killing Annie. I'm not sure you introduced Tito who is not in the character list.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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This is a scary book that is full of killing and murdering. Tito starts to help Miguel and later Miguel stops Tito from killing Annie. I'm not sure you introduced Tito who is not in the character list.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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He is the man with Miguel when they set the church on fire and took Annie. He wasn't going to be an important character but somehow his story changed. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It sure doesn't look good for Annie. I am hoping Garth finds out from Sophia where Miguel is before Tito kills the girl. I really like this.
No comprende (Don't understand, No comprendo I don't understand)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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It sure doesn't look good for Annie. I am hoping Garth finds out from Sophia where Miguel is before Tito kills the girl. I really like this.
No comprende (Don't understand, No comprendo I don't understand)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much Barbara. Something has to happen soon or I am going to run out of story lines...LOL
I think they are about to squeeze the necessary information out of Sofia and then the Calvary will be coming.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Yes, I see you do have a few hair raising moves up your sleeves. I'm glad I'm not watching this on a movie screen. I would about to have a heart attack. I know you aren't going to let Anne die. I'm looking forward to more. You post more chapters than anyone else on FanStory. You amazed me.
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Yes, I see you do have a few hair raising moves up your sleeves. I'm glad I'm not watching this on a movie screen. I would about to have a heart attack. I know you aren't going to let Anne die. I'm looking forward to more. You post more chapters than anyone else on FanStory. You amazed me.
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Beth. I guess when the story gets inside my head, I am not satisfied until I can put it on paper and share it. The characters just come alive inside me I guess. thank you for all your lsupport.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Mason has left everyone else 'holding the bag' so to speak. The successful dump of retardant stalls the escape of the plane and Sofia has been cuffed and arrested. Meanwhile, Miguel and Tito battle it out regarding Annie. Soon, however, they will all be in prison.
Ralf
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Mason has left everyone else 'holding the bag' so to speak. The successful dump of retardant stalls the escape of the plane and Sofia has been cuffed and arrested. Meanwhile, Miguel and Tito battle it out regarding Annie. Soon, however, they will all be in prison.
Ralf
(ee) shrugged his>>you mean 'he'
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Good morning, Ralf
The story is winding down so there isn't a lot of action anymore. Just trying to tie the ends together. thank you for the review.
Smiles, Carol