Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Unknown Destiny"Musings of an old man - 2022
15 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image, Jim.
-I applaud your quest for new and challenging forms.
-You did a good job, and the internal rhyme was excellent.
-Effective imagery describes various aspects of nowhere.
-Each couplet has a good concrete example.
-You do a good job with the last one including your name
and the description of yourself.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
  |
-Nice image, Jim.
-I applaud your quest for new and challenging forms.
-You did a good job, and the internal rhyme was excellent.
-Effective imagery describes various aspects of nowhere.
-Each couplet has a good concrete example.
-You do a good job with the last one including your name
and the description of yourself.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
-
I so appreciate you Pam! Enjoy the best of your day!
-
You are welcome, Jim, and I appreciate your reply. You have a great rest of your day, too.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is interesting to say the least! I enjoyed the style of your Ghazal very much. I have to say I've learned all I know about poetry from Fanstory. It amazes me that every time I click on someone new to read, I learn something new. Thank you for the lesson, JLR.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
|
This is interesting to say the least! I enjoyed the style of your Ghazal very much. I have to say I've learned all I know about poetry from Fanstory. It amazes me that every time I click on someone new to read, I learn something new. Thank you for the lesson, JLR.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
-
John, I raise the banner high also for FS and all the extraordinary writers that I have come across. Have a most joyous time discovering your inner voice! Jim
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like this inspirational work expressed in a new poetic style known as Ghazal about unknown destiny in a vivid and clear order of expression; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
|
I like this inspirational work expressed in a new poetic style known as Ghazal about unknown destiny in a vivid and clear order of expression; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
-
I thank you and I will certainly write again!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a a compendium of moves devoid of direction.
The work highlights vacant meadows ending nowhere; stone steps ascending nowhere; and so is JLR: always confident, but transcending nowhere.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes reminiscent of a life running in circles, leading nowhere.
Excellent work. Bravo.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
|
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a a compendium of moves devoid of direction.
The work highlights vacant meadows ending nowhere; stone steps ascending nowhere; and so is JLR: always confident, but transcending nowhere.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes reminiscent of a life running in circles, leading nowhere.
Excellent work. Bravo.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
-
Lloyd, spot on! Oft times arent we seemingly going nowhere? Thanks fro the review, Jim
-
Remain Blessed.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
OK so the destiny Is nowhere OK OK you kept it flowing to the beginning to the end you major point going nowhere This was pretty good all the way through what should the best of luck Keep going
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
|
OK so the destiny Is nowhere OK OK you kept it flowing to the beginning to the end you major point going nowhere This was pretty good all the way through what should the best of luck Keep going
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
-
GG thanks for passing through my words to nowhere! I have now discovered you on FS and will bookmark your work. Stay up with your Joyful Soul ever present!