Comment from jaded831

Excellent

A great celebration of life. Your poem made me smile. Life should be entertainment for anyone it's beauty, it's music, even rain has it's own beauty. Your poem is uplifting and a wonderful read.

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Thank you very much for your kind comments. Is there anything you can suggest to improve it to make it worth five stars? Any suggestions appreciated.

reply by jaded831 on 30-Mar-2022

I meant to give five stars.

reply by jaded831 on 30-Mar-2022

I apologize I hit the wrong button and didn?t realize I hit the wrong button. I corrected my blunder.

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Oh, you are wonderful! Thank you so much. I?ve done that a few times, it happens easily.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Great work on this acrostic poem, it has a very nice feel to it and everything flows well.

I particularly like this line- Life with these colours will cure many ills. - it sums up everything else in the poem so well.

Thanks for sharing this and have a great day



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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Thank you very much! Your review is both thoughtful and encouraging. Enjoy your day too.