Dribbles And Drabbles
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This story is a true horror story, in all its glory. Just one problem, and it's probably me. I was confused between 'the farmer' and 'the inheritor of the property'... please clarify for me.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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This story is a true horror story, in all its glory. Just one problem, and it's probably me. I was confused between 'the farmer' and 'the inheritor of the property'... please clarify for me.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, murder intertwined into this horror story as the buried body, now bones only, remind us of this farmer's murderous deed, a fine flash fiction, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Oh my goodness, murder intertwined into this horror story as the buried body, now bones only, remind us of this farmer's murderous deed, a fine flash fiction, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Appreciate the kind review.
Comment from John Ciarmello
These hundred words were well chosen and told the story of perhaps a murder for an inheritance? A body was buried under an oak. and dug up. It was no surprise who it was. Well done
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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These hundred words were well chosen and told the story of perhaps a murder for an inheritance? A body was buried under an oak. and dug up. It was no surprise who it was. Well done
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from prettybluebirds
You did a great job of telling a complete story in only one-hundred words. It is no easy feat to accomplish and I commend you for It. I love the ending to this short story. Best of luck in the contest. Nice work.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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You did a great job of telling a complete story in only one-hundred words. It is no easy feat to accomplish and I commend you for It. I love the ending to this short story. Best of luck in the contest. Nice work.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from lancellot
Well, this is nicely written. I will admit it does leaves a lot of questions, consider his first reaction was that he hit the remains of a pet, but then to go straight to the name of a person, just from a skull???
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Well, this is nicely written. I will admit it does leaves a lot of questions, consider his first reaction was that he hit the remains of a pet, but then to go straight to the name of a person, just from a skull???
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Appreciate the insightful review.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your story. That was quite a twist at the end! I also like the picture you selected to accompany your piece. It fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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I enjoyed your story. That was quite a twist at the end! I also like the picture you selected to accompany your piece. It fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Appreciate the kind review.