The Price of Gas
Space has it's own set of problems20 total reviews
Comment from JoannaN
Eating beans in the space is always a bad idea :) Your text is so creative and the last sentence is so funny. I wish you all the best in your contest. Best regards.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Eating beans in the space is always a bad idea :) Your text is so creative and the last sentence is so funny. I wish you all the best in your contest. Best regards.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks for you wonderful review. I'm not sure that beans are on the menu for astronauts, but if they are, maybe they are supplied with Gas-X as well.
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
This was an enjoyable read. I love the humor in it. Not what I expected from the title, but very clever. I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Hello!
This was an enjoyable read. I love the humor in it. Not what I expected from the title, but very clever. I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks so much for the very kind review. I do enjoy writing and appreciate the feedback.
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You are welcome!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about space; like everything, space also has its own set of problems; beans and bubbles of gas mutually reciprocal; you had a Mexican meal on dinner, even then farting takes place in the space; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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This speaks about space; like everything, space also has its own set of problems; beans and bubbles of gas mutually reciprocal; you had a Mexican meal on dinner, even then farting takes place in the space; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thanks for the exceptional review and comments. I would imagine that even in space you need to watch what you eat.
Comment from jessizero
This was a cute and funny (and kind of gross) story in 50 words. I was feeling a little worried when your character said he had eaten beans. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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This was a cute and funny (and kind of gross) story in 50 words. I was feeling a little worried when your character said he had eaten beans. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reading and reviewing this story. It's hard to say much in 50 words, but it's fun to try.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This piece is perfectly titled. The introduction and build up is succinct, with great imagery, and the ending is humorous. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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This piece is perfectly titled. The introduction and build up is succinct, with great imagery, and the ending is humorous. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading my 50 worder. I like the challenge of coming up with something.
Comment from Bridge
I couldn't help but chuckle after reading your story. Very clever and creative to write in so few words. Excellent work. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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I couldn't help but chuckle after reading your story. Very clever and creative to write in so few words. Excellent work. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thanks for the great review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your fine comments.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This made my day: I needed a good laugh, and this gave it to me. Your mind works in a mysterious and entertaining way. I really enjoyed the poem. Should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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This made my day: I needed a good laugh, and this gave it to me. Your mind works in a mysterious and entertaining way. I really enjoyed the poem. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thanks for the exceptional review. My mind is a mystery to me as well. So glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from sunnilicious
Oh my goodness, you're hilarious. Very creative story about flatulence. Modern. Funny. Completely entertaining. But let's keep it as escapism. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Oh my goodness, you're hilarious. Very creative story about flatulence. Modern. Funny. Completely entertaining. But let's keep it as escapism. Nice work :)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thanks for the great review and comments, you're very kind. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from LisaMay
The menu adviser should be sacked! Re-fried beans are notorious for inducing gas. Maybe they were hoping to save on rocket fuel and your suit should have been hooked up to the space ship's fuel system. I hope you weren't gassed to death.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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The menu adviser should be sacked! Re-fried beans are notorious for inducing gas. Maybe they were hoping to save on rocket fuel and your suit should have been hooked up to the space ship's fuel system. I hope you weren't gassed to death.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thanks for the great review and a hearty laugh. I love your sense of humor!
Comment from LisaD123
This is an entertaining piece and the reader can clearly empathise with the fart dilemma. The story is very clearly supported by the image. Good luck for the contest.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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This is an entertaining piece and the reader can clearly empathise with the fart dilemma. The story is very clearly supported by the image. Good luck for the contest.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for the great review. There are some places that passing gas just isn't in the best interest of anyone- weddings, funerals and space suits.