Comment from Rachel Jamerson1

Excellent

Wow! A story which seemed to be so pleasant - ending in the worst possible way. One thing for sure your readers will get an unexpected surprise. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022

Thanks.

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

Wow - a succinctly told account of many people's worst nightmare! If Jaws was just a trailer :-). This is clearly written, well paced (difficult in such a short form) and very effective. I greatly enjoyed it.

Mike

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 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022

Much appreciated review.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great seventy-five word story. I did not see that twist ending coming. I also like the picture you chose to accompany the story. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 06-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022

Thanks.