Letter to God
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is such a beautiful, expressive poem, and I feel that you MEAN every word of it. Your prayer for a way to be His light for others is one that moves Him; it is a noble prayer.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This is such a beautiful, expressive poem, and I feel that you MEAN every word of it. Your prayer for a way to be His light for others is one that moves Him; it is a noble prayer.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Hello Janice, Thanks so much for your kind review. Without Him I am lost. Love, K XX
Comment from Wendy G
This was very moving and beautifully written. What a fine unselfish letter, so Christlike. He will answer that one for sure, so be ready to be used! He will use whatever gifts you have and where you feel weak He will provide the strength. Best wishes for your entry in the contest. Sending you big hugs. And scratches behind the ears for Benny.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This was very moving and beautifully written. What a fine unselfish letter, so Christlike. He will answer that one for sure, so be ready to be used! He will use whatever gifts you have and where you feel weak He will provide the strength. Best wishes for your entry in the contest. Sending you big hugs. And scratches behind the ears for Benny.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Hello Sunni, Have you been a good doggie for mum? Tell mum I am sending her big hugs back. Your bestest friend Benny. PS getting my curls snipped tomorrow so mum can find me in the grass! K XX
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Sunny is a bit upset about Benny getting groomed! He says Benny will be smaller and thinner, and might get lost more easily! He suggests that Benny should wear a red scarf or have a bell on his collar. I told him that only cats have that. I sense a funny story coming here! Lol.
Wendy
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces fragile child Kay's plea to God concerning how she could be empowered to get humanity out of their sorry state.
The work earns its texture through its effective use anecdotes synonymous with the need for societal restoration.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces fragile child Kay's plea to God concerning how she could be empowered to get humanity out of their sorry state.
The work earns its texture through its effective use anecdotes synonymous with the need for societal restoration.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Bless you Lloyd for your positive review of my letter to god. Much appreciated. Blessings, Kay.
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Amen! Great KAY! Thanks for nominating me. Remain Blessed.
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is impeccably written and clearly expressed throughout. I like that you loved naturally between subjects without getting bogged down, and that you're asking only for things you're willing to give. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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This is impeccably written and clearly expressed throughout. I like that you loved naturally between subjects without getting bogged down, and that you're asking only for things you're willing to give. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Flee, If you have never suffered, you have never lived. Thank you friend. K xx
Comment from tfawcus
Your approach to this challenge is most original. I like the way you start. A real attention getter. However, it is the selfless plea that makes the letter so powerful. Beautifully expressed.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Your approach to this challenge is most original. I like the way you start. A real attention getter. However, it is the selfless plea that makes the letter so powerful. Beautifully expressed.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello my friend, I will be 77 in Sept. losing my eyesight and my hands are not the best. But I know He is the Everlasting Arms that supports me. Love, Kay.
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I'm sorry to hear of these afflictions. At least you have the support of a loving God to help you bear them. My thoughts are with you.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great post for the contest. What a heartfelt prayer and lament that reveals your struggles and faith and desire to be God's servant in a fallen and troubled world. Well done.
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Great post for the contest. What a heartfelt prayer and lament that reveals your struggles and faith and desire to be God's servant in a fallen and troubled world. Well done.
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Theo, Thank you for reading and glad it hit the spot. You can't feel real life if you have never suffered and we both have. I will be 77 in Sept. I need rubbing out and drawing again! Love, Kay.