Dribbles And Drabbles
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Comment from judiverse
Dapper Dan sounds like the horse's name. People do make a big deal about height. At 6'10" the server is unusually tall, so you'd have to think basketball. He's also a bit rude. Did you ever notice that those big-time jockeys are often married to tall, model-type women? Engaging flash fiction. judi
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Dapper Dan sounds like the horse's name. People do make a big deal about height. At 6'10" the server is unusually tall, so you'd have to think basketball. He's also a bit rude. Did you ever notice that those big-time jockeys are often married to tall, model-type women? Engaging flash fiction. judi
Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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So true with your comments.
Big time into thoroughbred racing, and jockeys seem to favor tall women.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, what a fun, at least for some, little story. I really
like the image. The dialogue is fitting and descriptive of
the characters.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Haha, what a fun, at least for some, little story. I really
like the image. The dialogue is fitting and descriptive of
the characters.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Humor attempted. Sole reason for this posting.
Appreciate the review.
Comment from BethShelby
LOl. Sometimes it doesn't pay to try to make conversation unless you don't mind being insulted. Some people of very sensitive about their height or lack of it. The writing tips R us sounds like good idea.
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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LOl. Sometimes it doesn't pay to try to make conversation unless you don't mind being insulted. Some people of very sensitive about their height or lack of it. The writing tips R us sounds like good idea.
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
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Invite you to check out the club. Appreciate the review.