Dribbles And Drabbles
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Comment from RodG
This story seemed plausible from start to finish. You set the scene well as we listen with bated breath to the door handle being jiggled. It was good to find out this was alla LOCK DOWN drill and not the real thing. Good suspense throughout and not a word wasted.
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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This story seemed plausible from start to finish. You set the scene well as we listen with bated breath to the door handle being jiggled. It was good to find out this was alla LOCK DOWN drill and not the real thing. Good suspense throughout and not a word wasted.
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this piece. Appreciate the review.
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My pleasure.