The Trollop
Illegal but lucrative.41 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation, Willie.
-I enjoyed your poem that tells a story with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good introduction to Jill and the prospector.
-Looks like he shouldn't have mentioned the gold!
-You use very good descriptive detail showing how
she conned him out of his money.
-He was lucky for the cowboy who interceded on his behalf.
-A good moral for the story, too.
-Very well done!!
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Willie.
-I enjoyed your poem that tells a story with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good introduction to Jill and the prospector.
-Looks like he shouldn't have mentioned the gold!
-You use very good descriptive detail showing how
she conned him out of his money.
-He was lucky for the cowboy who interceded on his behalf.
-A good moral for the story, too.
-Very well done!!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is a trade that never died out, it still goes on today, probably even worse than it did then.
I did enjoy your poem, and had to laugh at the moral of the story. Lol. I often wonder why men keep their wallets in their back pockets, my husband is always doing it. Mad! Well done, I'll read this to him! :)) Sandra xxx
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That is a trade that never died out, it still goes on today, probably even worse than it did then.
I did enjoy your poem, and had to laugh at the moral of the story. Lol. I often wonder why men keep their wallets in their back pockets, my husband is always doing it. Mad! Well done, I'll read this to him! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from zanya
The language is superb and evocative of a different time and place -the events are those of every age and time in the history of mankind-the tone is evocative & the font adds to the effect -wish I had 6!
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The language is superb and evocative of a different time and place -the events are those of every age and time in the history of mankind-the tone is evocative & the font adds to the effect -wish I had 6!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from Sally Law
Oh my, many were probably going the wrong way and fell to her charms. I haven't heard the word Trollop in years. A fun story in a poem with a cautionary word within.
Typo: trouble
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Oh my, many were probably going the wrong way and fell to her charms. I haven't heard the word Trollop in years. A fun story in a poem with a cautionary word within.
Typo: trouble
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
There have been women who think most men drinking at a bar are easy prey. That is not always the case, once bitten, they are on guard. You have written a great poem. One that has much truth. I think it is great when the man stops them in their tracks. Have a great day.
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There have been women who think most men drinking at a bar are easy prey. That is not always the case, once bitten, they are on guard. You have written a great poem. One that has much truth. I think it is great when the man stops them in their tracks. Have a great day.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from karenina
So a sensitive behind saved the day, hmmm?
Guess the trollop lost her gamble this time! Witty Western romp...I enjoyed the tale!
(I might have used a less fancy font though)
Just my opinion!
Karenina
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So a sensitive behind saved the day, hmmm?
Guess the trollop lost her gamble this time! Witty Western romp...I enjoyed the tale!
(I might have used a less fancy font though)
Just my opinion!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Honestly, the moral of the story is sincere truth and again humor. Many thanks for sharing this wonderful story in a poem.
Jill will hopefully never steal again.
Blessings and good health.
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Honestly, the moral of the story is sincere truth and again humor. Many thanks for sharing this wonderful story in a poem.
Jill will hopefully never steal again.
Blessings and good health.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
Comment from Wendy G
A fun story in rhyme, flowing well, and with a western feel to it. The characters seem realistic and authentic. Great moral you have included. Lol.
Wendy
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A fun story in rhyme, flowing well, and with a western feel to it. The characters seem realistic and authentic. Great moral you have included. Lol.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
I loved this one, Willie! I'm partial to the old west and love the history behind it. I can see this happening. You have a nack, cowboy! I always look forward to your posts. Best, JohnC
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I loved this one, Willie! I'm partial to the old west and love the history behind it. I can see this happening. You have a nack, cowboy! I always look forward to your posts. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
what can I say? I loved this cowboy poem! well done. Great use of rhyme, snarky sense of humor. If I had written it though I would have the cowboy shoot her dead for committing the crime but that's just me. Well done.
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what can I say? I loved this cowboy poem! well done. Great use of rhyme, snarky sense of humor. If I had written it though I would have the cowboy shoot her dead for committing the crime but that's just me. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022