Krasner Christmas
Happy Holidays!21 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A funny satirical newsletter. Your letter is creative and clever. With all the "misery," you managed to tell it upbeat and joyful for the coming year even if it is on skid row!
Best wishes and Merry Christmas.
Mary
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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A funny satirical newsletter. Your letter is creative and clever. With all the "misery," you managed to tell it upbeat and joyful for the coming year even if it is on skid row!
Best wishes and Merry Christmas.
Mary
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Glad you got it! I thought I?d would do better in this contest, but usually most people ?miss? on my sense of humor. Good times!!!
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. It was very humorous, and I really enjoyed it, with your wit and insight, and for your "confession" of all your FS accounts! Someone told me some people really do this. Not you, I know you wouldn't have more than one!
It has the same tone as my poem "I don't NEED to", where I was having a go at people who pay big bucks for reviews, and those who must win at any price. And of course many reviewers thought that was really me. Lol.
Happy to review yours for two cents. Well done. Best wishes. It's got a good chance!
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Lol. It was very humorous, and I really enjoyed it, with your wit and insight, and for your "confession" of all your FS accounts! Someone told me some people really do this. Not you, I know you wouldn't have more than one!
It has the same tone as my poem "I don't NEED to", where I was having a go at people who pay big bucks for reviews, and those who must win at any price. And of course many reviewers thought that was really me. Lol.
Happy to review yours for two cents. Well done. Best wishes. It's got a good chance!
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thanks Wendy. It been a good month! Thanks for the review and kind words!
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, what a hoot. I love the humorous satire of this newsletter. I think you have a strong entry for the contest. Good luck. Excellent writing. Thank you for entering. Terry
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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LOL, what a hoot. I love the humorous satire of this newsletter. I think you have a strong entry for the contest. Good luck. Excellent writing. Thank you for entering. Terry
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you my friend. I appreciate the great review and stars. I took the liberty to have a little fun with this contest.
Comment from Susan Newell
Douglas,
You made me laugh all the way through. This is one of the funniest things I've read for a long time. Satire is so effective when done well. Besides that, you inoculated yourself against SPAG alerts by writing completely in character. What does a banker know about lie and lay? Kudos for a hilarious Christmas letter.
Sue
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Douglas,
You made me laugh all the way through. This is one of the funniest things I've read for a long time. Satire is so effective when done well. Besides that, you inoculated yourself against SPAG alerts by writing completely in character. What does a banker know about lie and lay? Kudos for a hilarious Christmas letter.
Sue
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thanks Sue, I had fun with this one!
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You are very welcome, Douglas.
Comment from Soledadpaz
This was an absolute hoot! Too funny and written with such an optimistic voice. Nothing could get this narrator down. Not even the prospect of living on skid row.
Sol
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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This was an absolute hoot! Too funny and written with such an optimistic voice. Nothing could get this narrator down. Not even the prospect of living on skid row.
Sol
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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I thought you might laugh at this one. Thanks for fanning me and thanks for reviewing this. I appreciate you!
Comment from Dr. Von
Hilarious! Well done my creative friend. You have written an outstanding piece that exceeds the writing prompt. Thank you for sharing your talent and perspective. I do not have any recommendations. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Hilarious! Well done my creative friend. You have written an outstanding piece that exceeds the writing prompt. Thank you for sharing your talent and perspective. I do not have any recommendations. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you my friend We have snow in Michigan. Bet it is nice there in Texas!
Comment from Ulla
This is great stuff, Douglas, and a great entry for the contest. A mor dysfunctional family would be hard to come by. But here you go. All the best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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This is great stuff, Douglas, and a great entry for the contest. A mor dysfunctional family would be hard to come by. But here you go. All the best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you my friend.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
50% genius and 50% idiot? Which of these two are you underestimating. Whom am I, a brother-in-arms, to say, a fellow who as a boy before becoming a man thought the world revolved around him. Hey. For two cents, you expect a compliment? Still, I enjoyed the humerous in it.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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50% genius and 50% idiot? Which of these two are you underestimating. Whom am I, a brother-in-arms, to say, a fellow who as a boy before becoming a man thought the world revolved around him. Hey. For two cents, you expect a compliment? Still, I enjoyed the humerous in it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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That question is for you, the reader, to decide! Besides I don?t wrestle bears when I?m spanking monkeys on the butt!!
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Do we jest or are we jousting? I often am mistaken for words I speak when what was spoken was uttered with No ill intent intended. :-O
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We ate jesting. I loved your review. It was funny and well received. Although I have always wanted to try the joust.
My last line was to keep up my image as a mad genius!
All good. Carry on!
Comment from Ricky1024
I couldn't say a more nicer hello to a better darn family!
Did you forget to mention the long line of serial killing on Helen's side?
Or the fact that good old Rodger?
Yes, gets a kick out of occasionally raping beautiful blondes fresh out of high school?
Or that their pet "Skippy" just loves to crap all over the place because everybody's to lazy to walk the dog?
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This is a Christmas Card Newsletter Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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I couldn't say a more nicer hello to a better darn family!
Did you forget to mention the long line of serial killing on Helen's side?
Or the fact that good old Rodger?
Yes, gets a kick out of occasionally raping beautiful blondes fresh out of high school?
Or that their pet "Skippy" just loves to crap all over the place because everybody's to lazy to walk the dog?
...
This is a Christmas Card Newsletter Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Ha! We think a lot alike. Thank you for he awesome review!
Comment from Jay Squires
I can understand your continual laughter while writing this, Douglas (or Ralph). You should be lucky to get off being only crazy like your family says what with their contribution to it. But it sounds like you have all the makings for a Happy Holiday season. Good luck with the contest. Tom has a short memory.
Jay
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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I can understand your continual laughter while writing this, Douglas (or Ralph). You should be lucky to get off being only crazy like your family says what with their contribution to it. But it sounds like you have all the makings for a Happy Holiday season. Good luck with the contest. Tom has a short memory.
Jay
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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This was a fun one. Good times!