Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
We can clearly see the children bringing the Christmas tree home safely. In the picture, it looks like one child with their father or G'PA tugging at the tree. Your poem is very visual. As I read, I can see what's happening.
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We can clearly see the children bringing the Christmas tree home safely. In the picture, it looks like one child with their father or G'PA tugging at the tree. Your poem is very visual. As I read, I can see what's happening.
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Rosemary, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Beautiful. Very very heartwarming. I can smell the apple pie. What a beautiful memory to treasure. Thank you for sharing. Good Luck
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Beautiful. Very very heartwarming. I can smell the apple pie. What a beautiful memory to treasure. Thank you for sharing. Good Luck
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Barbara, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
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You too💕🙏😋
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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Raul, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
Comment from GWHARGIS
This could have been a Currier and Ives painting. Wonderfully warm and nostalgic. I loved the scenes that popped into my head. Great job on this. I really enjoyed it. Gretchen
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This could have been a Currier and Ives painting. Wonderfully warm and nostalgic. I loved the scenes that popped into my head. Great job on this. I really enjoyed it. Gretchen
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Gretchen, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
Comment from victor 66
You have a beautiful illustration to go with your well written poem. I don't mind that some people do not appreciate Christmas and it's magic. But I do so love this time of year. Makes me happy, I love the lights, the trees and the decorations. Presents are OK too. But gosh, how this season raises my spirits, and your poem lifted my heart as well. Keep writing and best wishes.
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You have a beautiful illustration to go with your well written poem. I don't mind that some people do not appreciate Christmas and it's magic. But I do so love this time of year. Makes me happy, I love the lights, the trees and the decorations. Presents are OK too. But gosh, how this season raises my spirits, and your poem lifted my heart as well. Keep writing and best wishes.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
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Victor, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
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This is late but, you are most welcome.
Comment from nomi338
Can there be a more deserving treat than to arrive home on a cold and clear night to find a well lit fire, a table laden with delicious and tasty food; a welcome smile from a loved one? heaven on Earth.
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Can there be a more deserving treat than to arrive home on a cold and clear night to find a well lit fire, a table laden with delicious and tasty food; a welcome smile from a loved one? heaven on Earth.
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Nomi, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This image is cut from a Christmas card and your words do it justice. I like your last stanza the best - I can see the weary son and child dragging the tree in after a long day of finding, cutting, and tugging it back home again. The smoke in the chimney is a promise of a warm, satisfying reward.
Nicely done!
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This image is cut from a Christmas card and your words do it justice. I like your last stanza the best - I can see the weary son and child dragging the tree in after a long day of finding, cutting, and tugging it back home again. The smoke in the chimney is a promise of a warm, satisfying reward.
Nicely done!
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Pam, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi JIm,
This is a well done ekphrastic poem. It clearly describes the scene and the boy's feelings. He is enjoying it and is thankful for it.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas.
Joan
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Hi JIm,
This is a well done ekphrastic poem. It clearly describes the scene and the boy's feelings. He is enjoying it and is thankful for it.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
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Joan, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
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My pleasure, Jim. Thanks for the holiday wishes.
Joan
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Tis the Season, presented with three ABAB-rhymed quatrains, captures the winter and holiday spirit that we knew as kids and preserve in our family's routines or at least in our fondest memories.
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This poem, Tis the Season, presented with three ABAB-rhymed quatrains, captures the winter and holiday spirit that we knew as kids and preserve in our family's routines or at least in our fondest memories.
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Thanks Bill.
Comment from Heather Knight
Beautifully written as usual. Perfectly formed stanzas and lovely rhyme.
You paint a lovely, nostalgic picture here.
Have a very Merry Christmas.
Thanks for sharing.
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Beautifully written as usual. Perfectly formed stanzas and lovely rhyme.
You paint a lovely, nostalgic picture here.
Have a very Merry Christmas.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
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Heather, Thanks for your positive validation and Merry Christmas to you also.