Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Barbara,

Excellent chapter, so well written and easy to follow.

I hope Ali and Cord marry soon.

The man in your story, covered a lot of evidence before Ali came to the scene.

Good thing they found the manuscript for --Tattered Hearts-- it could have been catastrophic.

Well done!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

I agree. I can't wait for it to be published. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Barbara. I have no sixes left for this chapter, this being mid week. It's interesting to what is going on here. I liked the dynamics.
Only one suggestion: I'd rather not do.= 'I'd rather not' would suffice. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

I omitted the 'do'. Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help and your support.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I'm sorry. I thought I had already reviewed this. I'm so behind in reviewing. I like how Ali is looking for the pictures and yearbook that will defintely link Amy and Rogers. Maybe Amy will be reunited with her parents when they show up for the trial. I have an idea they'll be there. The prom picture should prove Amy and Rogers were an item when she was in high school. It's funny that Cord skipped the prom to go to the rodeo. If there's DNA, that should be proof he's not the father of Amy's child, but Ali wants it to be airtight. Great chapter. judi

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by judiverse on 26-Jan-2023

You're welcome. Sorry to be so late, and I've already run out of sixes. I don't know how those people who post twice a day and top the list of reviewers manage to do it. judi

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Either do I? I sometimes wonder if they really read everything.

reply by judiverse on 26-Jan-2023

I don't know how they do it. Since you write novels, it's understandable you post once a week. You're pretty high up on the reviewers list. judi

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

I review daily, but I write the majority of the day.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Interesting development in the rape case and the child's possible beginnings in high school. I went to homecoming with a friend one year and we never dated. That may be shot down in court, but if you have enough evidence and DNA, it will be irrefutable.

The couple is sugar sweet. Hopefully the dream wedding and honeymoon won't be interrupted.

Sending you my best today as always,
Sal Xo

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review. We'll see. We have to get Cord to propose first.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Even those embarrassing moments can be sweet and memorable, but not for the person who gets caught saying those things, just everybody else. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review. I completely understand.

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Mushy, mushy. Got a good love affair going here. Perhaps the prom dress can bring to life something, but she would wear it to a rodeo. 10 years? Nothing wrong with this, But I have missed so much. As always, a good writer.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review. It was Amy's prom dress, the one she was raped in. Ali needed it for evidence against Rogers.

reply by Ben Colder on 26-Jan-2023

Got ya!

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Whew! I was afraid you were going to say that the prom dress was blue. (with a stain)
Nice progress.
One hitch - when Cord crossed his eyes and said that it was time to go in, he might need a few minutes to be presentable and to be in a condition to ably assist Ali.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

You may have a point. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

What's going on with Cord at the end? Is he thinking they're not getting to the wedding soon enough? Hmmm . . .

It sounds like we have evidence against Rogers now. I came a few chapters into the story so I'm confused about the Hardings - did they disown Amy for some reason?

Another good chapter, Barbara - moving things toward a just ending, I'm sure.

Do you want "dismissive" wave instead of a "dismissal" one?

He found a yearbook and handed it "TO" her

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Amy' parents disowned her when she was pregnant and still in high school and unmarried. After shew as raped, her mom tried to help her, but her dad didn't believe she was raped. After all Pat came from such a nice family, he wouldn't do anything like that. I have made corrections. Thank you for the help. I appreciate it.

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

I hope Amy will reconnect with her parents and they will be a happy family .cod's name has to be cleared and the child support has to be obtained from Rogers .lots of action in the future .I am looking forward to them..

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

I'm glad she is finally going to nail that jerk's butt to the wall. This is a wonderful story. You did a great job on this chapter. Congratulations on your new/old book coming out. Was that eBook on Amazon? Enjoy your evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Yes, it was an eBook on Amazon. It simply disappeared. Thank you for the kind review.