Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I know we do have troubles of our own, but I seem to be continually reading/watching the horrific shootings in the U.S.A. I believe less guns-produce more people, a beautiful tanka, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

Kym, thank you very much for the helpful and kind feedback. I appreciate the excellent five stars review.

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Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

When art reflects reality...
Such a moving offering, Gypsy.
Have visited Half Moon Bay many times over the years; what a terrible tragedy that you have exquisitely portrayed in your well-crafted Tanka.

Thank you for sharing...
diane

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

Diane, thank you very much for the helpful and kind feedback. I appreciate the excellent five stars review.

Gypsy hugs