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The Piper

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Young Adult Fantasy

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Comment from royowen
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It seems that Piper has found out about his flute he hadn't really known before, on of the reasons he destiny would be fulfilled is that their is also an enchantment resting on the flute, which seems to be sentient too. Beautifully written Debi, good to see you continuing your story, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
    Hi Roy,
    Thank you for the excellent review and the analysis. I appreciate the encouragement.
    Debi