A little chat (50 words)
My life in his hands12 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
Great point that sometimes it's the body language more than the spoken language that communicates. Harmless words will be followed-up with something not so pleasant.
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Great point that sometimes it's the body language more than the spoken language that communicates. Harmless words will be followed-up with something not so pleasant.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Many thanks for the review and stars
Comment from Olivanne Marsh
I think it is awesome that someone can write a complete story in 50 words. Congrats on your accomplishment, it's not as easy as it sounds and I admire the effort. I like the way you used "child doctor," to convey the doctor's youth; that was clever. Also, the way you framed the "little chat," as bad news. Realistic, every reader knows a doctor hardly ever has a "little chat," with a patient. If he sits you down for a talk, it's almost always bad news, otherwise they just tell you to put on your clothes and be sure to make your next appointment on your way out.
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I think it is awesome that someone can write a complete story in 50 words. Congrats on your accomplishment, it's not as easy as it sounds and I admire the effort. I like the way you used "child doctor," to convey the doctor's youth; that was clever. Also, the way you framed the "little chat," as bad news. Realistic, every reader knows a doctor hardly ever has a "little chat," with a patient. If he sits you down for a talk, it's almost always bad news, otherwise they just tell you to put on your clothes and be sure to make your next appointment on your way out.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Many thanks for the review and stars. Jen.