Tanka Collection
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Comment from JT traveller
Extremely romantic. I just have too many favourite lines. I love them all and how you have carefully woven them together to create a powerful and lovely poem.
"I want to kiss
the sunbeam bathing your skin --"
And,
"hungry for your contagious laugh --"
Fantastic.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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Extremely romantic. I just have too many favourite lines. I love them all and how you have carefully woven them together to create a powerful and lovely poem.
"I want to kiss
the sunbeam bathing your skin --"
And,
"hungry for your contagious laugh --"
Fantastic.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional 5 stars review. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy