Guided by Faith
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Comment from LJbutterfly
Hi Barbara,
I've always wanted to read one of your novels but struggle with the small print for my older eyes. This is my first attempt and I read one half one day, and the second half today. This sounds like a great beginning. I expect to enjoy a faith based story.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Hi Barbara,
I've always wanted to read one of your novels but struggle with the small print for my older eyes. This is my first attempt and I read one half one day, and the second half today. This sounds like a great beginning. I expect to enjoy a faith based story.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. What I have done often is copy and paste it into word and then set my own font.
Comment from lyenochka
Wow, it would be good to have neighbor/landlord like Chief Seth Carter! I guess he has a fatherly concern but I wonder how big the age span is. And the "Ms." surprised me as I remember when that title was first proposed and then made fun of and now, I don't hear anyone use "Ms." anymore. Lol.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Wow, it would be good to have neighbor/landlord like Chief Seth Carter! I guess he has a fatherly concern but I wonder how big the age span is. And the "Ms." surprised me as I remember when that title was first proposed and then made fun of and now, I don't hear anyone use "Ms." anymore. Lol.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Seth will use it for a while. There is an age difference, and it bothers Seth, a lot. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lady MJ
Enjoyable reading! What "take charge" person does not come across as being bossy? I enjoyed Seth's character. It puts a spin on the personalities featured in this story. I am sure that as the novel goes on, he will be introduced to something that will tone him down a bit or two. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Enjoyable reading! What "take charge" person does not come across as being bossy? I enjoyed Seth's character. It puts a spin on the personalities featured in this story. I am sure that as the novel goes on, he will be introduced to something that will tone him down a bit or two. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Seth does tone down as the story progresses. Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
As Police Chief he should know long hours come with the job.
Shouldn't "at his watch" be of his watch?
The Chief seems like he is coming on pretty strong to her.
Shouldn't "Seth with is dog" be Seth with his dog?
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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As Police Chief he should know long hours come with the job.
Shouldn't "at his watch" be of his watch?
The Chief seems like he is coming on pretty strong to her.
Shouldn't "Seth with is dog" be Seth with his dog?
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the catches. I have made both corrections. I have a bad habit of leaving out words. Yes, does come on strong, but there's a reason to be addressed later. LOL I have a feeling he's more concerned about the lack of coffee that the long hours.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-The artwork is gorgeous, barbara.
-Your notes are appreciated and I enjoyed the story.
-You give us a good idea of what the characters are like
and how the bakery and bookstore has changed.
-It seems it now offers dancing, and Seth has a lot of questions.
-He strikes me as someone who takes pride in his job, and expects things to be right. He also seems intrigued by Emma.
-The interaction later between Seth and Emma is done well, and shows his his concern about things being done right since he is renting the home to Emma.
-He doesn't leave anything to chance, and does the job right, regardless of what it is.
-I think you are off to a good start.
-The only thing I would suggest is at the end. Seth and Ace are the subjects and that is immediately followed by "glanced over his shoulder..." You need to clarify that it is Seth who glanced, etc.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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-The artwork is gorgeous, barbara.
-Your notes are appreciated and I enjoyed the story.
-You give us a good idea of what the characters are like
and how the bakery and bookstore has changed.
-It seems it now offers dancing, and Seth has a lot of questions.
-He strikes me as someone who takes pride in his job, and expects things to be right. He also seems intrigued by Emma.
-The interaction later between Seth and Emma is done well, and shows his his concern about things being done right since he is renting the home to Emma.
-He doesn't leave anything to chance, and does the job right, regardless of what it is.
-I think you are off to a good start.
-The only thing I would suggest is at the end. Seth and Ace are the subjects and that is immediately followed by "glanced over his shoulder..." You need to clarify that it is Seth who glanced, etc.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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I will make that change. Thank you for the suggestion.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your novel got off to a great start, Barbara. I enjoyed
reading it. Your characters were introduced in a fun
way an seemed perfect for the setting. Emma is feisty
and hasn't learned one never argues with the police-
-esp the chief. Seth seemed all business-like, but we'll
see I'm sure. I believe you have given yourself many
tangents to expand in future chapters. The video was
perfect.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Your novel got off to a great start, Barbara. I enjoyed
reading it. Your characters were introduced in a fun
way an seemed perfect for the setting. Emma is feisty
and hasn't learned one never argues with the police-
-esp the chief. Seth seemed all business-like, but we'll
see I'm sure. I believe you have given yourself many
tangents to expand in future chapters. The video was
perfect.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I like your story already, and I have only read the first chapter. The picture you found to portray Emma, is beautiful. The dialogue helps to make this a great story. I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I like your story already, and I have only read the first chapter. The picture you found to portray Emma, is beautiful. The dialogue helps to make this a great story. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from w.j.debi
I like the characters already. I was smiling as Emma and Seth met. They seem different enough to cause some great interaction and, perhaps, a bit of conflict as they get to know each other. The action and the dialog flow naturally. I think Seth sums it up nicely, "This is going to be interesting."
I love the picture you chose.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I like the characters already. I was smiling as Emma and Seth met. They seem different enough to cause some great interaction and, perhaps, a bit of conflict as they get to know each other. The action and the dialog flow naturally. I think Seth sums it up nicely, "This is going to be interesting."
I love the picture you chose.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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It will be an interesting ride as these two both grow individually and together. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I'm happy to read your new novel. You are an exceptional writer.
Wonderful introduction to the characters that seem real.
Poor police chief Seth has a hard job...not much sleep.
Emma sounds like a sweet girl and beautiful with green eyes and red hair.
The scene with Seth checking Emma's foot it's very romantic. He is very protective towards her. What woman doesn't like that. LoL
Well done!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I'm happy to read your new novel. You are an exceptional writer.
Wonderful introduction to the characters that seem real.
Poor police chief Seth has a hard job...not much sleep.
Emma sounds like a sweet girl and beautiful with green eyes and red hair.
The scene with Seth checking Emma's foot it's very romantic. He is very protective towards her. What woman doesn't like that. LoL
Well done!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it coming from you.
Comment from Ricky1024
I used to review a lot of Margaret Snowden's work
Strictly 18th century novelist.
This reminded me a little bit of her work but in the more modern way.
It reminds me of Brett Matthew West's work also. He's always bringing the police into it!
Thanks for sharing and let's see how it progresses?
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I used to review a lot of Margaret Snowden's work
Strictly 18th century novelist.
This reminded me a little bit of her work but in the more modern way.
It reminds me of Brett Matthew West's work also. He's always bringing the police into it!
Thanks for sharing and let's see how it progresses?
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I used to review Margaret's work too. Thank you for the comparison.