Guided by Faith
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Comment from Mario PIERRE
The story chapter is quite interesting as there is a lot of dialogue and not too much tedious descriptions. The characters are easy to imagine and they are well described here. Please don't be mad with me, but I remember reading a few of your nice writings, and my major comment is always this: each chapter needs to end on a strong note, either to grapple our attention so we want to read the next, or it has to convey a sense of anticipation. But I really liked reading it.
Mario
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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The story chapter is quite interesting as there is a lot of dialogue and not too much tedious descriptions. The characters are easy to imagine and they are well described here. Please don't be mad with me, but I remember reading a few of your nice writings, and my major comment is always this: each chapter needs to end on a strong note, either to grapple our attention so we want to read the next, or it has to convey a sense of anticipation. But I really liked reading it.
Mario
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the suggestion, but this isn't the end of a chapter. I simple split it for FanStory.
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OH... Tell me, Barbara, where can I read one of your complete book ?
Thanks
Mario
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amazon, there are 4 there
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Okay, I don't know why I am missing out on your posts. I thought I had fanned you. I will check when I save this review. I will have to go back to see what happened here and why she is helping the police identify someone. I found the chapter to be informative and entertaining. Well done, Barb. Nancy:)
(I can't seem to fan you or contact you. Why? Too many Fans?)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Okay, I don't know why I am missing out on your posts. I thought I had fanned you. I will check when I save this review. I will have to go back to see what happened here and why she is helping the police identify someone. I found the chapter to be informative and entertaining. Well done, Barb. Nancy:)
(I can't seem to fan you or contact you. Why? Too many Fans?)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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I have no clue. I don't have as many fans as a lot of people. You may want to check with Tom. Emma is being stalked and somebody siphoned gas from her car. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from w.j.debi
So Emma has some competition for Seth's attention, or at least someone who hopes to catch Seth's eye. Love the added drama. It's so realistic in a small town.
The characters are engaging. I am eager to see what is next.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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So Emma has some competition for Seth's attention, or at least someone who hopes to catch Seth's eye. Love the added drama. It's so realistic in a small town.
The characters are engaging. I am eager to see what is next.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Thank you for understanding small towns.
Comment from judiverse
Peggy is certainly outspoken about her interest in Seth. She was very rude to Emma. She's overplaying her hand and it won't win her anything. Maybe she's the stalker, but Seth would probably know what kind of car she drives. I'm looking for Peggy to stir up more trouble. Interesting conflict. Great details about Emma helping Jake with the description of the man who had spooked her at college. You've got some interesting situations going, as well as great characters. judi
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Peggy is certainly outspoken about her interest in Seth. She was very rude to Emma. She's overplaying her hand and it won't win her anything. Maybe she's the stalker, but Seth would probably know what kind of car she drives. I'm looking for Peggy to stir up more trouble. Interesting conflict. Great details about Emma helping Jake with the description of the man who had spooked her at college. You've got some interesting situations going, as well as great characters. judi
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Yes, Peggy will be a continuing problem. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. Peggy seems the kind of person who will stoop to dirty tricks to keep Emma away from Seth. judi
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, it's always a pleasure to tune in every week and read all your stories, but this one talking about the bakery, a peach Danish, or favorite pastries has me thinking about the sugary goodness. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Well, it's always a pleasure to tune in every week and read all your stories, but this one talking about the bakery, a peach Danish, or favorite pastries has me thinking about the sugary goodness. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Enjoying this more and more. So Peggy has her sights on Seth. That could prove interesting. I was glad Emma called them out in her way, for their teasing. This is really starting to get tense. Just the way she described him staring made me shiver. Really good, Barbara.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Enjoying this more and more. So Peggy has her sights on Seth. That could prove interesting. I was glad Emma called them out in her way, for their teasing. This is really starting to get tense. Just the way she described him staring made me shiver. Really good, Barbara.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Peggy will be a continuing problem.
Comment from Spitfire
After reading your post on Meet the Authors I decided to check out a chapter in your latest novel. I like that so much of it is dialogue as opposed to narration. The hint of a possible romance is also there.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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After reading your post on Meet the Authors I decided to check out a chapter in your latest novel. I like that so much of it is dialogue as opposed to narration. The hint of a possible romance is also there.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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I always use dialogue as a way to move the story along. It's more show, and not so much telling. Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Another interesting and well written chapter. I think Peggy will make some complications later - she's making her feelings obvious. That facial recognition and sketching is interesting. She remembered quite a lovely TV of detail so that gives plenty to work with. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Another interesting and well written chapter. I think Peggy will make some complications later - she's making her feelings obvious. That facial recognition and sketching is interesting. She remembered quite a lovely TV of detail so that gives plenty to work with. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is a very interesting post. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery and great dialogue. It was a joy to read and review. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Barbara, This is a very interesting post. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery and great dialogue. It was a joy to read and review. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Jim Wile
So, it appears we have a stalker. You've certainly built some suspense and curiosity for what this guy is all about. It was interesting learning about how that sketch creation software works. Seems a lot more efficient than the old-fashioned sketch artist.
This was an enjoyable chapter, Barbara. I didn't notice any mistakes either. Jim
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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So, it appears we have a stalker. You've certainly built some suspense and curiosity for what this guy is all about. It was interesting learning about how that sketch creation software works. Seems a lot more efficient than the old-fashioned sketch artist.
This was an enjoyable chapter, Barbara. I didn't notice any mistakes either. Jim
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.