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Once in a lifetime thing17 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
Gretchen, this is so well written I had to look twice (I think I getting a short memory like old folks do) to see that it was fiction. I did think as I read the story that you would take it to skydiving, but you did it in an elegant way. Excellent. Terry.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Gretchen, this is so well written I had to look twice (I think I getting a short memory like old folks do) to see that it was fiction. I did think as I read the story that you would take it to skydiving, but you did it in an elegant way. Excellent. Terry.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments and the nice compliment. Gretchen
Comment from Pam (respa)
This is an excellent story, Gretchen, and I could picture some of details of Ruby's life without any picture to go with it. You allow us to get to know her and her special bond with her Uncle Jack.
But life has wonderful things and sadder things, and Ruby lost her Uncle Jack, and the person who called her "daredevil." You wrote a very tender line about that: "But never again did anyone call her daredevil."
After she married, you give good examples of how Ruby and her husband celebrated with adventures they enjoyed, even in their 70's. They enjoyed life and experiencing these adventures together. But once again she lost the person she loved, but she was inspired by the urn on
the mantle and decided how she would celebrate this birthday.
As the ending of the story approaches, she has fulfilled one of her dreams and is a daredevil once again. I wonder if her late husband had put that in the note when he had made the reservation, but even if he didn't, "She wasn't mommy or ma'am. She was a daredevil."
A wonderful story with the perfect ending. I enjoyed reading it, and it is deserving of my last six star of the week.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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This is an excellent story, Gretchen, and I could picture some of details of Ruby's life without any picture to go with it. You allow us to get to know her and her special bond with her Uncle Jack.
But life has wonderful things and sadder things, and Ruby lost her Uncle Jack, and the person who called her "daredevil." You wrote a very tender line about that: "But never again did anyone call her daredevil."
After she married, you give good examples of how Ruby and her husband celebrated with adventures they enjoyed, even in their 70's. They enjoyed life and experiencing these adventures together. But once again she lost the person she loved, but she was inspired by the urn on
the mantle and decided how she would celebrate this birthday.
As the ending of the story approaches, she has fulfilled one of her dreams and is a daredevil once again. I wonder if her late husband had put that in the note when he had made the reservation, but even if he didn't, "She wasn't mommy or ma'am. She was a daredevil."
A wonderful story with the perfect ending. I enjoyed reading it, and it is deserving of my last six star of the week.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this. I appreciate both the review and the stars. Gretchen
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Gretchen.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is such an original idea and one that is totally believable. It is the sort of thing a loving husband might do, not realising that he would not be around to celebrate with her, and then of course she made sure that he was.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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This is such an original idea and one that is totally believable. It is the sort of thing a loving husband might do, not realising that he would not be around to celebrate with her, and then of course she made sure that he was.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this nice review and the awesome stars. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
What a great story. How wonderful that her husband had thoughtfully booked the jump. Love how it came full circle to her being a daredevil one more time. Well written, an enjoyable read.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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What a great story. How wonderful that her husband had thoughtfully booked the jump. Love how it came full circle to her being a daredevil one more time. Well written, an enjoyable read.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the gift of six stars. Much appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from lancellot
A very sweet and fast paced tale. And you are right, usually, it's never too late. This story also shows that young boy or girl you used to be is still inside us, waiting for a chance to capture those early dreams.
Good work.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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A very sweet and fast paced tale. And you are right, usually, it's never too late. This story also shows that young boy or girl you used to be is still inside us, waiting for a chance to capture those early dreams.
Good work.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments. And you're exactly right. The child inside us never really goes away. Gretchen
Comment from JT traveller
What a beautiful story. It has made my day. We may age but the spirit of adventure remains strong and steadfast inside. A thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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What a beautiful story. It has made my day. We may age but the spirit of adventure remains strong and steadfast inside. A thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Gretchen
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Comment from jessizero
This was moving and exciting! I loved the story from start to beginning. The last sentence was especially great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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This was moving and exciting! I loved the story from start to beginning. The last sentence was especially great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your lively review. I appreciate your comments. Gretchen