Tanka Collection
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Oh my that's ominous! I can't imagine having to go through such a thing and anyone who does on my Lord. My heart is there with them!
This is quite a powerful poem you have given and a haunting picture to match. Creates quite a shock to the system.
Having said that you are an expert and have created all of this with your poem your word choices and talent. This poem swept me along...really good and a fine submission! Have a great night!
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Oh my that's ominous! I can't imagine having to go through such a thing and anyone who does on my Lord. My heart is there with them!
This is quite a powerful poem you have given and a haunting picture to match. Creates quite a shock to the system.
Having said that you are an expert and have created all of this with your poem your word choices and talent. This poem swept me along...really good and a fine submission! Have a great night!
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Lea. I appreciate your time and excellent review.
Gypsy hugs