Love and Loss
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Endless "NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
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Comment from Ricky1024
"Endless" is a contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry and have a Blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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"Endless" is a contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry and have a Blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Absolutely right and directly on the money! We are spiritual beings having a human experience are we not?
You're work always finds a way to create an impact and make the mind think this to me is gold! Even in a single long poem such as this you have managed to do that so congratulations again to you! You know complete this work with the gorgeous picture This together gave me a smile with I thank you for!
I see no issues grammatically or aesthetically speaking with your poem. It is the lifeline also reassuring that this life is not the only one lead. Have yourself a great day!
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Absolutely right and directly on the money! We are spiritual beings having a human experience are we not?
You're work always finds a way to create an impact and make the mind think this to me is gold! Even in a single long poem such as this you have managed to do that so congratulations again to you! You know complete this work with the gorgeous picture This together gave me a smile with I thank you for!
I see no issues grammatically or aesthetically speaking with your poem. It is the lifeline also reassuring that this life is not the only one lead. Have yourself a great day!
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you Lea, that means a lot to me!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We humans have certainly been going for a while, but not as long as the universe and I enjoyed your poignant one liner Jessica, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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We humans have certainly been going for a while, but not as long as the universe and I enjoyed your poignant one liner Jessica, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Dolly!