Guided by Faith
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Comment from Wendy G
That is a very dramatic chapter, and who knows what the results of the tornado might be? The stranger is still unidentified, and is an eerie presence in the background. And romance is developing. Well done, as always.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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That is a very dramatic chapter, and who knows what the results of the tornado might be? The stranger is still unidentified, and is an eerie presence in the background. And romance is developing. Well done, as always.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. The stranger will be important to the story.
Comment from Sanku
The dancing inside the bakery was fun reading. Tornado adds to the sense of adventure ...and concern .You have described it very well. And the mystery of the stalker is there
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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The dancing inside the bakery was fun reading. Tornado adds to the sense of adventure ...and concern .You have described it very well. And the mystery of the stalker is there
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sankey
Glad you are back. I was composing a poem on time changes and you up over folks planning ahead for posting hehe. This was a good chapter and I appreciate the Tornado lecture. One possible spag?? Those of you[,] who walk the beat,
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Glad you are back. I was composing a poem on time changes and you up over folks planning ahead for posting hehe. This was a good chapter and I appreciate the Tornado lecture. One possible spag?? Those of you[,] who walk the beat,
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Fixed that area. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
Barb, this chapter has a bit of everything... meeting with the pastors trying to identify this guy, dancing at the cafe, a tornado, Seth & Emma inching closer and closer.
I saw no areas needing help.
Good writing. John
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Barb, this chapter has a bit of everything... meeting with the pastors trying to identify this guy, dancing at the cafe, a tornado, Seth & Emma inching closer and closer.
I saw no areas needing help.
Good writing. John
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the wonderful support.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
I could hear my father telling me I needed to go home with him in a situation like this. Good for Emma for standing her ground as an adult. I am enjoying your novel. jan
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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barbara:
I could hear my father telling me I needed to go home with him in a situation like this. Good for Emma for standing her ground as an adult. I am enjoying your novel. jan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is your best chapter so far, Barb. You still have the suspense of the strange man, and the tornado adds a great deal to the story. I'm sure that romance is in the future.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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This is your best chapter so far, Barb. You still have the suspense of the strange man, and the tornado adds a great deal to the story. I'm sure that romance is in the future.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Pam (respa)
This is an excellent chapter, barbara. There was a lot of character interaction and dialog. you developed the situation very well. It was a nice scene with Miss Sadie and people dancing with her. There was some progress on the identity of the intruder, but they think the name is fake.
Good descriptive detail about getting ready for the storm. It is good no one is by themselves. Even the two dogs get settled in the bed. Eventually, Seth has to make some rounds, with Ace at his side. It seems Emma feels she will be okay, but I wouldn't want to be by myself. I do not like storms!
One small thing: Those of you, who walk the beat, check stores and residences. [In this sentence you don't need the commas because the clause is essential to the description of who is involved. If it isn't needed, then you use commas]
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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This is an excellent chapter, barbara. There was a lot of character interaction and dialog. you developed the situation very well. It was a nice scene with Miss Sadie and people dancing with her. There was some progress on the identity of the intruder, but they think the name is fake.
Good descriptive detail about getting ready for the storm. It is good no one is by themselves. Even the two dogs get settled in the bed. Eventually, Seth has to make some rounds, with Ace at his side. It seems Emma feels she will be okay, but I wouldn't want to be by myself. I do not like storms!
One small thing: Those of you, who walk the beat, check stores and residences. [In this sentence you don't need the commas because the clause is essential to the description of who is involved. If it isn't needed, then you use commas]
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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I had already removed one comma. I just went back and removed the other one. I hate storms myself. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are very welcome for the review. I appreciate your reply.
Comment from lancellot
A nicely written chapter. I guess it goes without saying, that if I was Seth, is a shelter with a pretty, young, and amazing woman I had feelings for, and who clearly had interest in me, at their incredibly young ages, that neither behave as, I would have made a move (you know).
Just kidding (but not really). It is a good chapter. Worthy of a six.
But... I do wonder when Christian religious part will come in.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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A nicely written chapter. I guess it goes without saying, that if I was Seth, is a shelter with a pretty, young, and amazing woman I had feelings for, and who clearly had interest in me, at their incredibly young ages, that neither behave as, I would have made a move (you know).
Just kidding (but not really). It is a good chapter. Worthy of a six.
But... I do wonder when Christian religious part will come in.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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The faith part is playing a part the entire time. In the next chapter Emma talks a little more about it. Thank you for the kind review. Come on - making a move during a tornado.
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LOL. Well, I could have been their last day on Earth.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Tornadoes have been happening left and right in the states this spring. Is Emma going to be alright? Will her friend come home in time to rescue her from the tornado? Who is the fellow who they are trying to capture? Someone they know.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Tornadoes have been happening left and right in the states this spring. Is Emma going to be alright? Will her friend come home in time to rescue her from the tornado? Who is the fellow who they are trying to capture? Someone they know.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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The stranger will cause a huge problem. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
That was a suspenseful and at times gripping chapter, Barbara, with the tornado beating down on them. It's a natural element of suspense when there is the silence in the eye of the storm. You handled it well.
Jay
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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That was a suspenseful and at times gripping chapter, Barbara, with the tornado beating down on them. It's a natural element of suspense when there is the silence in the eye of the storm. You handled it well.
Jay
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.