Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sensual and deeply emotional and sensitive write about an intimate moment in time, a fine connection made here in this tanka, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You're so good at describing passion and you know how to conjure up all the senses such as the smell of jasmine and the taste of "salty drops" and the touching of skin.

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023

Thank you, big sister. Your kind words mean a lot to me. I appreciate your insightful review. (*<>*)

Love,
MariVal

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

lol love the last line "well-used bed"!

very sensual and romantic tanka
loved the colours, too

an all-around great presentation

thank you for sharing
shelley :)



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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Shelley, you are very kind. Have a wonderful night.

Gypsy hugs