Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

There is hope of a good harvest with the promise of rain. I like how your tanka has us look up to the skies and see the clouds and then the transition to promises fulfilled by a healthy amount of rain on the land.

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023

Thank you very much big sister. I always appreciate your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Love,

Marival ❤️

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like the idea of raindrops being filled with promises

a great tanka
excellent word choices
smooth flow
cool pic and presentation colours

i have no suggestions

thank you for sharing
shelley :)




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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs