Thirty (hopefully) Poems for April
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Comment from lyenochka
Sounds like me. I have lots of light sleep and some REM sleep but not enough deep sleep! I like the double use of that last line as it shows the sense of anxiety.
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Sounds like me. I have lots of light sleep and some REM sleep but not enough deep sleep! I like the double use of that last line as it shows the sense of anxiety.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Helen, for your kind and understanding feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra :) x