Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Gorgeous photo, it is quite amazing how such opposites can somehow balance each other, an excellent rictameter for the club challenge, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, kahpot :) I appreciate your kind feedback. Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

What a beautiful way to celebrate the uniqueness of your two daughters by writing this poem. Using the sun and the moon for comparison gives us a sense of their differences but equal merit. Nicely done!

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Ginda :) I appreciate your kind feedback. Best wishes, Debra

Comment from royowen

Excellent

We are both luck, my two girls, Rebecca and Catherine, like yours, are chalk and cheese, one thing in common though, both great mums and wives, very close, I'm proud of both, beautifully written, Debra, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Roy, for your kind feedback and for sharing about your daughters. How blessed we are!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

reply by royowen on 30-Apr-2023

We are indeed