Thirty (hopefully) Poems for April
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Comment from lyenochka
A lovely haiku ! Yes, that's a great way to think about the morning - a new day, with its surprises and rituals unfolds. I especially liked the alliteration of "songbird sweetly serenades" !
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reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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A lovely haiku ! Yes, that's a great way to think about the morning - a new day, with its surprises and rituals unfolds. I especially liked the alliteration of "songbird sweetly serenades" !
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Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Helen :) Glad you enjoyed my haiku!
Best wishes as always, Debra x