Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

LOVE daisies!! they're my fave flower!

this was a great haiku and a cool picture and colour scheme to accompany it

may i make a suggestion for the letters?
how about putting "birthday" in yellow and the other words in white since the daisy has a yellow center and to make "birthday" stand out a bit
just a thought ;)


thank you for sharing
shelley :)




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 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Hi Shelley :) Thank you for your kind feedback and suggestion. Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

So cute and memorable! One for your pocket too! This is such a delight to read in its perfect presentation. Love the alliteration and imagery. Thanks for sharing, Debra. It's put a smile on my face! Take care, Debbie

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 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Debbie :) Glad you enjoyed! Best wishes as always, Debra x

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 06-May-2023

Sorry, it went off at speed before I was finished (obviously competing with you!)