Love You More
With every sunrise30 total reviews
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
I've read a few excellent entries into this loop contest. But this is my favorite so far. Bad loop can be very forced, awkward and obvious. I was many lines into this before I recognized it as loop. It's simply a very touching poem that stands on its own without the constraints of loop holding it together. You are cranking out a tremendous volume of high quality poetry, Jessica. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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I've read a few excellent entries into this loop contest. But this is my favorite so far. Bad loop can be very forced, awkward and obvious. I was many lines into this before I recognized it as loop. It's simply a very touching poem that stands on its own without the constraints of loop holding it together. You are cranking out a tremendous volume of high quality poetry, Jessica. Well done.
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Charles, I am so honored by the stars, but much more by your kind-worded review! I cannot thank you enough for taking the time to share your thoughts. Xoxo
Jessica
Comment from karenina
I swear this automatically went into "Song" mode in my head and I sat hear singing it quietly to myself. Such a compliment to you! Great flow, warms my parental and grandparental heart...and sweet as can be in the loopiest way possible!
(grin)
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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I swear this automatically went into "Song" mode in my head and I sat hear singing it quietly to myself. Such a compliment to you! Great flow, warms my parental and grandparental heart...and sweet as can be in the loopiest way possible!
(grin)
Karenina
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Karenina!! This form was trickier than I expected! I?m honored by your compliment!
Xo
Jessica
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You did it so well! (Shhhh--everyone else will think it came easy!)
:)
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear poet, wonderfully
penned and a stellar write of
the love a parent has for their
child/children. May you have
the best of luck in the
competition. Many of
God's blessings to you and
yours. All the best. ~
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Dear poet, wonderfully
penned and a stellar write of
the love a parent has for their
child/children. May you have
the best of luck in the
competition. Many of
God's blessings to you and
yours. All the best. ~
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you!! I truly appreciate that!
Comment from royowen
I just love the sentiment ensconced I'm this lovely loop poem. Everything seems to have its moment in the sun, and the good old loop poetry is having its moment. You have quickly a beautifully adapted yourself to fanstory, well done Jessica, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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I just love the sentiment ensconced I'm this lovely loop poem. Everything seems to have its moment in the sun, and the good old loop poetry is having its moment. You have quickly a beautifully adapted yourself to fanstory, well done Jessica, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Roy, thank you so much. I am amazed at how much I have learned since joining in February. Reviewers, like yourself, have given such helpful and essential feedback, it?s truly made a difference. I was just looking at some earlier stuff the other day, and the difference (at least to me) is mind blowing! Thank you. xo
Jessica
Comment from nomi338
Awesome effort. I loved the way you followed the rules for this type of poem. What was awesome was you did not sacrifice content solely in search of ways to remain consistent. You actually had something of interest to say.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Awesome effort. I loved the way you followed the rules for this type of poem. What was awesome was you did not sacrifice content solely in search of ways to remain consistent. You actually had something of interest to say.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Nomi! Xo
Jessica
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh Jess, this is so lovely and I do love the loop effect. But your writing is the part I love the most. Your love for your girls screams love, tenderness and cherished treasures. That is what your girls are to you and I understand that completely. Children are the most wonderful gift from God and I am so blessed myself that I feel like I know yours now too. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us Jess and thank you for being you. That is who I came to love as you too are a cherished treasure. This should do wonderful in the contest.
My best wishes to you Sweetheart!
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Oh Jess, this is so lovely and I do love the loop effect. But your writing is the part I love the most. Your love for your girls screams love, tenderness and cherished treasures. That is what your girls are to you and I understand that completely. Children are the most wonderful gift from God and I am so blessed myself that I feel like I know yours now too. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us Jess and thank you for being you. That is who I came to love as you too are a cherished treasure. This should do wonderful in the contest.
My best wishes to you Sweetheart!
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you so so so much, Debi!! Your words mean so much, as always! Miss you!
Xoxox
Jess
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
A very sweet and well done loop poem about a mother reasurring her child that she will always love them and even more as the years go by. It seems us kids always need to know mom still loves us. Hope you do or did well in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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A very sweet and well done loop poem about a mother reasurring her child that she will always love them and even more as the years go by. It seems us kids always need to know mom still loves us. Hope you do or did well in the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Chrissy710
HI Jessica, A lovely loop poem and full of love for your child, and many here would agree with your words, our children are the delight of our lives and grandies too.. Nicely done
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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HI Jessica, A lovely loop poem and full of love for your child, and many here would agree with your words, our children are the delight of our lives and grandies too.. Nicely done
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Chris!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Zoe Webb
This was heartfelt and sweet! I liked the repetition of the ending and starting words. You also styled this really well! I like the picture and font choice.
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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This was heartfelt and sweet! I liked the repetition of the ending and starting words. You also styled this really well! I like the picture and font choice.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thanks so much, Zoe!
Comment from GWHARGIS
Awe. This was so sweet. I liked the lullaby tone to this. How could a child not feel warm, safe, loved and cozy hearing this from a parent. The rhythm was great. It flowed in a soft lyrical way. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Awe. This was so sweet. I liked the lullaby tone to this. How could a child not feel warm, safe, loved and cozy hearing this from a parent. The rhythm was great. It flowed in a soft lyrical way. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Gretchen!
Xo