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The Piper

Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "The Piper, part 49"
Young Adult Fantasy

12 total reviews 
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a delightful story (I think I have written that before) and I particularly like this chapter where you vacillate between the worry that Piper will cause harm and the hope that he will help. You play this dichotomy with skill. kay

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
    Hi Kay,
    Thank you for the exceptional rating, six stars and especially the comments. I appreciate the encouragement.
    Debi
Comment from royowen
Excellent
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I love your story Debi. The enchanted realm of the folk that sometimes live at the bottom end of the garden, or in the greenwood. I love the idea of music healing, but up to now it's metaphoric, but here we have the literal healing of Sheba, Mage flute, an variation on the magic flute, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
    Hi Roy,
    Thank you for continuing to support this story. I am happy you like it and are enjoying the healing power of music.
    God bless.
    Hey, congrats on the Poem of the Month win!
    Debi
reply by royowen on 06-Jun-2023
    Absolutely