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Romantic Tanka Poems

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Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your tanks poem- interesting picture presentation- very flexible!
Suggest checking syllable count (4) could be (3)? Poem has good flow -good use of metaphors- good Job - AP

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
    AP,

    Thank you for catching that error.

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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You must have really experienced some great passionate relationships. I know sandalwood is popular but I find it much too pungent. It is a lasting fragrance!!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
    I like a little drop in my wrists.

    Thank you very much, big sister. With my last husband we were very passionate.

    Love,

    Marival ❤️



Comment from PENofFIRE
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This is a well-written poem which I enjoyed greatly. I love the way you placed your words to paint a beautiful picture of someone expressing their love for another. Very romantic indeed.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was so provocative. I liked the soul filled verses. There is an intoxicating feeling to this. The heady feel of sensuality. Thank you for posting. I really enjoyed this. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
    Classic Tanka is romantic. It was created in the Japanese Imperial Court. Lovers wrote tanka for eachother after a night of lovemaking. Tanka and haiku are my favorites.

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
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This is so very naughty but nice. You do have a poetry back that seems to bare the soul. Good stuff!!!

Thank you for sharing your talents with us!
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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs