The Piper
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Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is my first time to read this story.
It is interesting to
Read how you describe Pipe uses his flute to deal with the wasps.
As the crowd began to disperse, Rudd-Leif and Melodica come to greet Piper. The next thing is bit moving. piper noticed his father got hurt and automatically he called him Father. Needless to say, father was moved.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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This is my first time to read this story.
It is interesting to
Read how you describe Pipe uses his flute to deal with the wasps.
As the crowd began to disperse, Rudd-Leif and Melodica come to greet Piper. The next thing is bit moving. piper noticed his father got hurt and automatically he called him Father. Needless to say, father was moved.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind comments and for pointing out the parts you found interesting.
Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a wonderful post to get your 200-milestone post award. Congratulations on that!!!! I enjoyed reading. I couldn't but smile when Piper got stung. LOL Thank you for sharing this with us.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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This is a wonderful post to get your 200-milestone post award. Congratulations on that!!!! I enjoyed reading. I couldn't but smile when Piper got stung. LOL Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind comments and congratulations. I'm glad you smiled when Piper got stung. It just seemed appropriate. I appreciate you stopping by.
Debi