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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "My Mother's Hands"
Poems of the things of the spirit

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Comment from JSD
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This is a beautiful sonnet (I think) in which you explore an extended image of your own hands. The point of view is unusual but thoroughly successful. And the ending is perfect. Well done.

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much. It is a sonnet and I thank you for the encouragement.