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2023 Gypsy's Free Verse

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Comment from lyenochka
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These are really comforting words to the one who is struggling. I feel like that's the loving and caring words of God Who is always with us and can help us even when nothing else in the world makes sense and we never feel like we can fit in. But we know we are at home in God's Presence.

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Yes, you are right. In a couple of places I thought of you and what you tell me.

    Thank you very much big sister. Love you.

    Marival
reply by lyenochka on 14-Sep-2023
    💖💖🙏🌼🌺 Sorry you are going through a rough time. Sending hugs and prayers.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Thank you 😊
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Is this a conversation with yourself? It sounds very sad and I hope you are feeling better now. Life can throw some bad times at us and getting through them is not easy at times. Your poem reflects on how much you are loved, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Thank you, dolly. Yes, it's about me. Having a hard day today. But I know I'm loved.