Sories Poetically Speaking
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "One Witch's Halloween"A complete story in written as a poem.
23 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Beth,
This is a cute child's Halloween poem. It shows that not all witches are evil.
This is the kind of witch I wouldn't mind having as a neighbor.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a nice rest of the weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Hi Beth,
This is a cute child's Halloween poem. It shows that not all witches are evil.
This is the kind of witch I wouldn't mind having as a neighbor.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a nice rest of the weekend
Joan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Joan. I appreciate your reviewing my childrens poem. It is the second poem of written about this witch. She was a evil witch on the first one but not quite as nice.
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No problem, Beth.
Joan
Comment from Lisasview
I just loved reading your Halloween Childrens Poetry poem for the contest.
Seems rather perfect to me.
Great font, great image, and great rhymes...
Should do very well,
Lisa
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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I just loved reading your Halloween Childrens Poetry poem for the contest.
Seems rather perfect to me.
Great font, great image, and great rhymes...
Should do very well,
Lisa
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Thank you Lisa. I appreciate your comments. Thank you so much for the review.
Beth
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Good morning Beth..
You are most welcome,
Lisa
Comment from Daylily
Love your point of view being expressed so creatively through this children's poem. It's a reading-delight for many adults, as well. Your rhyming couplets and artwork support each other wonderfully. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Love your point of view being expressed so creatively through this children's poem. It's a reading-delight for many adults, as well. Your rhyming couplets and artwork support each other wonderfully. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comments. I appreciate the review.
Beth
Comment from Mrs. KT
Absolutely delightful, Beth!
Will share with my grandsons; they will so love it as well!
Rhymes are clean.
A wonderful story told!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Absolutely delightful, Beth!
Will share with my grandsons; they will so love it as well!
Rhymes are clean.
A wonderful story told!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Thank you Diane. I'm glad you liked my little poem.
Beth
Comment from zanya
It's that time of year again and here is a delightful poem to celebrate the season - a good witch- nice to know they exist too- and a super pic to illustrate.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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It's that time of year again and here is a delightful poem to celebrate the season - a good witch- nice to know they exist too- and a super pic to illustrate.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Thank you Zanya. I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Douglas Goff
How so very cute, Beth! Kids would love this.
Eye-catching!:
Don't be afraid as she comes into sight;
she means no harm, and her kitty don't bite.
Loved it!
D
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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How so very cute, Beth! Kids would love this.
Eye-catching!:
Don't be afraid as she comes into sight;
she means no harm, and her kitty don't bite.
Loved it!
D
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you Douglas, I really appreciate the nice review.
Beth
Comment from Janis Miller
This is very cute and I love when poems have creative names for characters. It makes them memorable for children to enjoy. Thank you for sharing your poem.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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This is very cute and I love when poems have creative names for characters. It makes them memorable for children to enjoy. Thank you for sharing your poem.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you the review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Interesting with strong rhymes.
Kind of reminds of Samantha on that ancient television program Bewitched.
FYI: Attributed your contribution in my latest chapter of Wallet, if you have not already seen the posting. No review necessary, but have had high compliments on you and your writing prowess. Much appreciated. Told you that you'd see those words again.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Interesting with strong rhymes.
Kind of reminds of Samantha on that ancient television program Bewitched.
FYI: Attributed your contribution in my latest chapter of Wallet, if you have not already seen the posting. No review necessary, but have had high compliments on you and your writing prowess. Much appreciated. Told you that you'd see those words again.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you Brett. I did review that chapter and told you I was happy Cody found an opportunity to use that word. I appreciate you reviewing my childrens poem. It is second poem I wrote about this witch. I got the name from my mom telling me about a black lady she knew when she was a child. I liked the name so much I wanted to use.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a delightful children's post for the contest and I enjoyed your fine story about this witch who tries to do right, a fun post Beth, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Ha ha ha, this is a delightful children's post for the contest and I enjoyed your fine story about this witch who tries to do right, a fun post Beth, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you Dolly. I so glad you liked this.
Beth
Comment from Eleri
I like this take on witches and Halloween - it's nice to hear about a good witch for a change. The poem generally reads well and I like the rhyming but I think you have used 'trombone' because you needed something to rhyme with crone as it does not get mentioned again in the poem. I think I would have said something about her playing it if it was meant to be important.
Good luck in the contest
Eleri
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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I like this take on witches and Halloween - it's nice to hear about a good witch for a change. The poem generally reads well and I like the rhyming but I think you have used 'trombone' because you needed something to rhyme with crone as it does not get mentioned again in the poem. I think I would have said something about her playing it if it was meant to be important.
Good luck in the contest
Eleri
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you Eleri. I appreciate the review and comments. Yes I needed something to rhyme with crone. It is second poem about this witch. In the first she had a mojo bone but I didn't think kids would know what that was. I might think about letting her play the trombone in another verse.