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I died and yet?

I died on the operating table

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Comment from lyenochka
Exceptional
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Your story is such an astounding one that it merits being told again and again. Thank you for sharing the miracle of your survival and the beautiful encounter of that death experience. Great job! Best wishes in the contest!

Suggestions:
"A form for amputation of your left leg" (period after 'leg')
"Watch the people." He said. ("Watch the people," he said.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
    Many hugs coming your way! Thank you for reading my friend. love, Kay xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This sounds so urgent and tragic and I read your post twice to understand what happened here. I am so sorry you had to suffer like this and the events changed your life forever, a faithful and sad post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
    Simply put Dolly. The terrible pain a woman feels giving birth and then the pain is forgotten when the child is born. I became a better person after my accident. A hard lesson. Love, Kay xx
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 08-Oct-2023
    Oh Kay, bless you x x x
Comment from Teri7
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Kay, This is a very beautiful story and testimony you have penned about when you lost your leg. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing this with us. love and blessings my friend! Teri

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
    Hello Teri, We know there is nothing to fear when we go to our real home and the joy of meeting our loved ones and sitting at the feet of our Lord! Love, Kay XX
Comment from w.j.debi
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This is an amazing experience. You could have been so bitter about the accident and the loss of your leg. Instead, you share the glimpse of what lies on the other side, the joy you felt, and the peace you feel now.
Thank you for sharing. It is comforting to read of you faith as I head off to sleep for the night.
Best of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
    Hello, my friend. Many thanks for your kind words. It was a hard lesson to learn but the joy I experienced for a short time was certainly worth it. I am never the person I was after visiting heaven. Love, Kay XX Thanks for reading.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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This is a wonderful story you've shared with us. you have written it beautifully. And in such a way that it's completely understandable and no margin for error.
Experiences like yours have happened to many over the world. And yet we are still looked at as if we might be losing our marvels. Thank you for the reminder that there is life beyond this. And the life we live now. Is a ripple in a pond a page on a book or a ring in a tree. We live this life and then we're free.
Juxture or subject matter, this is very well written very well. Put together and a strong submission. I wish best of luck!

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
    Hello, Lea. Many thanks for your in-depth review. Before the accident, I thought I was bulletproof. After three months in hospital and knowing that god needed me here. Humility is my path. Love, Kay xx