Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

This is a delightful and fun Halloween poem. So clever and well-written. It is a great submission to the Halloween contest.
Great presentation.
I enjoyed it.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023

Thank you, Mary. I'm glad you liked my little poem.
Beth

Comment from Sarita Méndez

Excellent

This is a nice little poem on what happens in cemeteries on Halloween. I love your description of the fight and the dance, and the little bit of humour.
Thank you for sharing this and good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023

Thank you Sarita. I appreciate the review and nice comments.
Beth

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Halloween has always been one of my favorite nights of the year. An overgrown kid who like nothing better than to give out candy or scare others into panic. :-) Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023

It's my youngest daughter favorite holiday too. You can't go into house with tripping over skelletons and other horrors.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Cute. Clever. It reminds me of the Christmas Story when all through the house nothing stirred not even a mouse but with an autumnal spin instead of scented pine.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023

Thank you Tom. The end of reminds me a little bit of that too. I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Well,you certainly met the Halloween Poetry Contest challenge with this delightful thing. Just scary enough for me. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023

Thanks again, my friend. It was fun to write and hopefully not too scary.
Beth

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was wonderful, Beth! I could see them all dancing the Monster Mash, and having fun. This is a really good contest entry, perfect for Halloween, well done, my friend. Good luck!! Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023

Thank you, Sandra. It was fun to write. I'm glad you liked it.
Beth

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the Halloween Poetry Contest. The contrast between warring and partying is particularly well developed and provides a good character study of each of the specters. kay

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023

Thank you Katherine. I'm glad you liked this. Thanks so much for the review.
Beth

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

Great job with rhyme in your Halloween poem. I especially liked the lines:
The ghosts and ghouls joined in the squabble. You should have seen all those tomb stones wobble.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023

Thank you Verna. It was fun to write. I appreciate the comments.
Beth

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

I love it! What a cheerful take on a cemetery. Who knows what goes on when no one's watching. If I had to pick a part - almost impossible - it would be the zombie wanting the goblin to call in advance.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023

Thank you for the nice review and comments. I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a fine Halloween party night down at the cemetery Beth and I loved all the fun going on, dancing with ghosts, spooks, monsters and zombies, this party had it all, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023

Thank you Dolly. I glad you enjoyed my fun Halloween poem.
Beth